So much fun had here. Continue please? Thanks for writing this, and bye for now.

I'll admit, I reflexively disliked the talk about "the betrayed badass because most are assholes" that seems to infect most of the bad fanfic with Naruto or Harry textured oc's, but I think yours is the first I've read where it isn't a problem. Aside from that knee-jerk reaction, I really like the story

Alrighty, just finished a binge of this. You got me interested enough to toss it into the community, But you should probably take a quick scrub through the current chapters. You're making a very common mistake in your grammar that should be fairly quick to fix. In case you couldn't tell by the last sentence, I speak of the your/you're rule. When using 'your', it is a possessive. "This is your pencil." "Your dragon pride is showing." "Not my problem, It's yours." common examples. 'You're' is a contraction, a shortening of 'You are'. "You're brilliant!" "You're a pretty decent writer." "You're a wizard, Harry." Basically if you look at a sentence like this one from this chapter: '"Your taking this rather well," I said.' you can see that 'your' doesn't fit in the context. as a similar, made up sentence using 'your taking' correctly, see this: "The world is ripe for your taking." So, who's taking is it in this context? It's yours! See, possessive descriptor. So the previous sentence can be corrected as follows: "You are taking this rather well" or "You're taking this rather well."

Of course, if you don't have the time to go through all 11 rather lengthy chapters, you can also use an online editor I recommend for free at www Hemingwayapp com (just add periods) it's pretty decent and you can just copy paste from your usual documents directly into the editor to help spot grammar mistakes, among other things.

Either way, I do enjoy the story and am looking forward to more. happy writing!

The Uncle is Andrew Wells.

Can’t wait for the next chapter

Buffy Rune? Othala if I recall is too young to be Buffy and the only teenage female cape with the E88 in canon is Rune but seeing as this is fanon she might not have actually joined.

Hrm, interesting story all around so far, but i've i'm curious enough to ask is Glastig Uaine Luna? She seems like a likely candidate...

is this a continuation/next generation of one of your other stories? (or someone else's HP/DxD xover for that matter?) and if so can we get a title (and if it's another's work the authors name as well?)

Seems legit yet random at the same time. I’ve read fusion universe things before and you haven’t made any of the mistakes that pop up in many of them. Honestly as long as you don’t drop heroic spirits or a Kaleidoscope stick thing I’ll be a ok

First of all, yay on Harry and Hermione ended up together. But...where's Luna? uh, knowing her... that particular troll will enter from the left-field, as usual.

Secondly, I can see Hermione rolling her eyes sooo hard that Harry ended up being a anti-Hero Marquis.

Well this is a glorious clusterfuck...i love it!
So far the story is proving that old adage that there is bad crazy and GlOrIoUs crazy true, this is the later.. I wan't to see where this rabbit hole will lead.

Thanks for the story!

She's obviously Buffy the petite vampire-slayer. She's got sticks for arms.

Hmmmm... what I'm curious about is how Hermione died... unless... did that curse from Dolohov or the torturing from Bellatrix come back to haunt them, because I can't imagine that she would die of cancer like canon Amelia's mother was said to of? Also, I'm curious as to what Harry's perspective of things is (especially if he developed something similar to canon Marquis' beliefs and behaviors). It's also a bit confusing that he hasn't tried to use magic to just hide somewhere else until people forget him and the family. What point is there in sitting in the Birdcage and not doing a thing for Amy?

Is he trying to make her life partially emulate his in some Dumbledore-esque scheme? If it's a matter of trying to avoid attention... I'm curious as to what it is that could make him submit in such a way.

Wonderful chapter as always.
The Tree explanation I understood pretty well, considering it's how I view every reality, too. it's a whole lot easier to view time and realities as branches instead of linear.

... things are rapidly spiraling to chaos.