This was lovely fun!

I absolutely loved this so much.

More please. Love the story do much.

I loved the oneshot.
fluffy sequel

Helloe My Darling Dash. I actually did read this one before but then got called to Houston and lost my review. So now I must read it again. And no...I don't mind a bit. This Sev is *insert heart eyesturns fan to high*
*rubs hands together*

Before I get too overheated, I would like to note that I loved the thought of him drinking his coffee. It's adorable.
Umm... getting worn out by Severus Snape? No ONE would complain about it. Well...none of my people anyway. haha. I certainly wouldn't. Thank you for giving us this absolutely hot remembrance scene. I really like his inner thoughts of how other people think of her vs what she actually is.
"fascinated fear" that's such a poignant phrase.
And his little poasessiveness about had hair! It's making me miss my long ass hair, I tell you that.

Oh lort hammercy. His face...there! I don't have enough fans for this.

"His inner asshole glared at him" this made me giggle and I find itso very accurate for him. haha
That's it HG! Touch him everywhere!
Not idiocy to mark her, Severus. Fucking hot is what that is.

I find that I can absolutely imagine the rings something that he would want. Poor love hasn't had someone to love him like this and it fits his personality.

Oh dear...and my mind just wanders off to thoughts of a tiny girl Snape with curly black hair.
Baby, your clingy nature is NOT going to drive her away. Nope.
I melted at the idea of him having his voice in these fantasies.

There's just something about doing the dirty in a desk. *fans self* I've only managed it once. Remind me to tell you the story.
"jewels of pleasure and gold dipped orgasms" How delightful!

Jealous and possessive Severus is still my favorite. Yep Yep. *eyes glaze overshakes self*
Ok, I'm back. I think.

*standing ovation* Brava My Darling Dash! This has been everything. Thank you.

All my love
Clawzette

Awesome as always.

Omg! I just love them together *le sigh*

Sev taking his coffee with flavoured cream just touches a soft place in my heart. lol I don't even like hazelnut and you made that first sip taste so good.

Felt a cold wind talking about Ice Queen HG. Good. Gonna need it lol Ha of course,he knows how to play to his strengths... Use the voice *wink*

Ok pause the heat... YES DASH! You tell them (via Sev) that it is OK to have curls and fuck those "professional" beauty standards! *fist bump*

Back in the frying pan now...

I didn't know warm satin rain was a thing I needed in my life until now.

Him asking was the sweetest thing. Then she asks for permission to touch him! Gah, I'm melting! Consent is so sexy!

I laughed at the "thrilled by the idiocy" comment. I feel you, Sev. Live those dreams man.

"Take from me what you need" *sighing contentedly*

The after-climax cuddles have unravelled me completely and I'm just a mess of thread on the floor. The softness and cohesion of the two characters, the blissful peace you gave him, her desire to extend the sensations for him... So perfect, so tangible. Magnifique dear Dashling.

BAHAHAHA his jealousy backfired spectacularly! My little poly heart is so happy right now.

Yeah... kids will kill the libido expeditiously. Nice little morsel of truth you put in there to cold shower our Sev.

Those good night wishes were so deliciously sweet. Cling forever Sev, just keep clinging on.

And he took the potion! Ugh, the flow of this story is perfect. PERFECT!

Ooh that outfit HG... Work it girl! That was so well planned Dash. Needing a fan before they're even on top of the desk with the pencil skirt and champagne blouse...

Ambrosia is one of my favourite words.

Daww the heart bubbles! Now I'm just seeing Sev surrounded in a super fluffy bathtub of love.

So, dunno if you have ever had lemon chess pie, but it's rich, sweet, and lemony, and describes this chapter perfectly. I still don't know how you do it. Ancient magic I suppose.

All the champagne heart bubbles,

Vine

awe man this was AWESOME! I agree with you, this could've been an epic longer fic! wonderful story, thank you!

beautiful story. I wish it was longer a lot longer.

You should totally do atleast one more chapter of this

Dashling Dear!

Already laughing in the AN. "Specifically Severus" don't we all, love.

Yay for a peaceful Sev life. He the rest and comfort.

Aww Harry saved him! Go HP!

And Fred! I'm rolling in the fluff.

Ooh the income stream! :dollar signs in my eyes:

Haha "foolish wand waving".

Oh Sev honey, let me introduce you to some witches who will let you know they are... thinking about you haha

I feel HGs thoughts on dating so damn hard. Stated perfectly.

Jasmine is one of my favorite smells. I'm so glad HG is actually taking care of herself in this story.

Haha his curiosity got the better of him. What if it would have been Umbridge thinking about him?

How do you make me laugh during lemons? Her saying the thing about that not being a good defense position has me out of breath laughing.

Yes, yes that voice is definitely dark magic.

"Tell me, are you mine?Yes! Yes I am!: Oh... you were talking to HG... oh ok then... :disappointed blush: lmao

Damn she ran out of air?

Taste like a rainforest :besotted sigh:

Love how he gets lost in his head during scene 2.

"A spell" hahaha HG... deded

Fuck and then you just rip my heart out and kill it with fire. Crying.

Fuck him for letting her lay there sad all night.

Two weeks?! He waited two weeks?! Bastard.

Then he just runs into her in public?! She should have hexed his ass.

Fred and George are cool af. Favorite Weasels!

Cheers for the happy ending!

Thank you so much for writing!

Here's to all the Sev detentions and dreams come true,

Vine

Hot damn

I totally loved it! You could write a series based on the idea.

Brilliant! Loved it!