| Reviews for Forgotten Family |
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   FallingToast chapter 33 . 10/19 Ow my heart! Oooooo this was such a great chapter The raw emotion in it... I’m speechless! Externally, I’m sitting calmly by my computer typing this, internally however I’m sobbing Excellent job! |
| phetiamwantip chapter 33 . 10/17 Whoa, I have to say, that was a very interesting backstory. And great job on your new chapter this is going well. |
| moimyoryour chapter 6 . 10/15 XD I love Morros and Lloyd's reaction when they realize that they are half naked in front of each other |
| phetiamwantip chapter 32 . 10/11 I see. If Jasper is explaining everything about Elizabeth to Morro and Lloyd perhaps then, they’ll know the answer at the end of the flashback. Also, good job on your new chapter it’s going very well. |
| phetiamwantip chapter 31 . 9/27 Whoa, Jasper has been through a lot back then and everything about Elizabeth, too. I wonder what will Morro and Lloyd would say to him. I have admit it this new chapter you made is going pretty good. |
| FallingToast chapter 30 . 8/30 He don’t know what a pizza is my vote is yes XD Also, ooooo achievement unlocked Morro’s tragic backstory 2 electric boogaloo! XD Lol but seriously I can’t wait to see what happened! Holy heck your writing has seriously gotten so amazing! Have you noticed you Chapters are longer now too? Its amazing to see! :D |
| phetiamwantip chapter 30 . 8/30 I see what you mean, I wonder what will he say about Elizabeth. And I have to say, good job on new chapter. |
| FallingToast chapter 29 . 8/30 Ooooooooo the tea is hot today! |
| phetiamwantip chapter 29 . 8/15 You’re welcome. Also, I wonder who’s Master Elizabeth? Let me know who she is and great job on your new chapter, hope to see more of your chapters soon. Keep up the good work! |
| phetiamwantip chapter 28 . 7/16 I wonder if the Ninjas will ever be able to find Lloyd in the big woods. Also, good job on your new chapter it’s going very well. |
| GreenNinja429 chapter 27 . 7/7 I like jasper, I’m obsessed with wolves so that’s cool I love your writing. I write fan fiction of my own but I can’t post it, so don’t search up my name, ANYWAY I kinda use some of your writing techniques in my own; it helps a lot. Nice chapter! I love mysterious doors. |
| ItsYoGreenGirl chapter 27 . 7/3 Don’t mess with big bro Kai. He’ll rip you to shreds. How long has Lloyd been missing? Like a week maybe? Poor ninjas. They’re probably been freaking out this entire time. O H the LETTER! O h Koso’s going to see W U! An secret door! My dog has definitely gotten me into trouble before. They’re such snitches. I got up one night to get a late night snack, and I’m a very sneaky person, but my dog was sleeping in the living room and saw me and started barking. Point blank my dog tattled on me for trying to get a granola bar. |
| phetiamwantip chapter 27 . 7/3 This new chapter is going very well. Also, it’s cool, I’m alright with it. |
| GreenNinja429 chapter 7 . 6/3 Elizabeth is my name |
| ItsYoGreenGirl chapter 26 . 6/2 Oh poor Morro and Koso lol. They’re just a bunch of tired peoples. But Koso said “Idc if I’m tired, y’all are still gonna train like your lives depend on it!” Oh nO! Lloyd! My chilllllllld. Jasper is LOYAL to Morro XD Oh my gosh yaaass! Teach Morro to write and read Lloyd i sweat do it! YAAAS! (Oh my lord I am the spectator for a boxing match) |
