New Chapter is New.

New Chapter is Good.

Write more EoE, SWG.

You know I always wondered why Shirou got away with that stuff in fanfics.
Guess in this timeline, he destroys le clock tower and becomes a true heroic spirit.

It’ll be interesting to hear more stories. Enough angles and anecdotes, and maybe we’ll finally learn the truth.

It’ll be interesting to see how the hunters react when they figure it out too.

Even more interesting will be when they inevitably get to experience Unlimited Blade Works.

Lovely chapter, and I’m glad I was able to help bring this to the readers!

To be frank i am fan of shirou. And if the clock tower is full of assholes. A few Caladobolg and gae bolg to thé face should be enought

Been loving this story. Obviously it’s not canon Shirou, but I’m interested in what his goals are. Please keep up the great work!

The Hell with Chapter III
Don't leave a Cliffhanger be followed by Data sheet..
It kills the motivation to read you know.

Well, Isaac's death flag had been triggered. Now the question is whether the "tracker" mystic code will hit him on the head and inject the metals into his head, killing him immediately or would the tracker hit him in other places and hurt him, thus reducing his combat effectiveness.

What direction would you take this story to? Would the assassination attempt work out in the end when every member finally puts down their efforts to truly work together, thus killing Shirou or bringing him back to the Clock Tower alive for experimentation. Or would Shirou kill them all in his grief of loss friends Archer style.

Or would it be that Shirou would spare some members like the mystic code crafter Jaques and the magical girl Emile? Hope you could spin a fabulous tale for us to read!

Thanks for the chapter and hope to read from you soon.

Thanks for the character sheets, with their general appearance and background information as well as their skill set. This could help returning readers to remember the original characters.

Man I can’t wait for Heavy and EMIllya to work together.

Pyro seems like a cool person, and Sakura is a reliable narrator.

And so, our 'Hero' braves into the unknowns of Mother Russia, evading his captors and eluding dissection one sword at a time. While Shirou seems to have lost sight of his ideals in this post-UBW, I hope Avalon will give Emiya the rest he deserves. A Greek tragedy already in the making, and we the audience, have no choice but to see the inevitable, whatever that may be. Your cliffhangers and narrarion is exquisite, albeit a little blueballing, bur I suppose we'll just have to wait until then

Hope the rumour of Rin and probably Sakura's death are made up by the mage association. Isn't Zelretch supposed to be looking after Rin in some way to prevent her from being killed as Rin is apprenticed under him?

I also hoped that Shirou hasn't gone completely under happy if Rin and Sakura were truly dead. More like being determined to not lose anymore close families and friends. But this story seems to be going in a dark way for Shirou.

I wonder will Shirou have anyone left if Rin and Sakura are dead. Maybe Ilya is still alive due to some as of yet unrevealed plot point in the past and Shirou is desperately killing everyone who are coming after him and his last family member.

I know this is a strange request but could you upload a pseudo chapter about the 8 OCs you use that includes their name, appearance and abilities, maybe some history of them too. Not saying to reveal everything about your OCs, but to slowly fill out the description page about the OCs as the story progressed. In my opinion, this could help us readers to remember your characters better and won't forget who is who after you upload a new chapter a month later.

Thanks for the chapter and I hope to read more from you soon.

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Wowza. This is quite the departure from your other stories, and I'm liking the direction this adventurous tragedy is heading.

I'm curious, though, as to how Emiya will pursue his begotten dream as a Hero of Justice, or as the story implies, go rogue on completely different path. The narration is crisp and concise, brimmed with detail but never overwhelming.

Heartbroken I may be at the death of our dearest Tsundere, I look forward to future updates to this story.

Love it already