Good luck!
Thank you.

YAY, you're back with a cool chapter!

This is great work so far. I really like the descriptions you used, they really set the mood you were trying to convey.
I was actually wondering if you wanted to join a discord that a friend of mine owns. It's for writers to share their work, get feedback, and offer tips and stuff. You can actually promote work too, if you're good enough. I think they'd be happy to have you. Here's the invite, if you want to check it out.
/WqWV9Ns

At first, I thought this was just gonna be some low quality story, and by chapter 3 and now chapter 5 i'm really starting to see this stories quality, Keep up the good work man.

I can see an improvement from your earlier chapters.

By half I meant a quarter

Hey it's me agent 8 and lemme get this straight. There's an inkling that's half Octoling? Cool!

This fic is pretty good. It could move a bit slower and add in some description but the pacing here is moving at a much more acceptable level. Chapter 1 felt a bit rushed like it was trying to get to the main story too quickly but now it’s slowed down a bit.

The fic right now is actually going fairly strong. I LOVE the constant switching of perspectives and a larger plot is being perfectly teased. I have my eye on this. Please keep it up.