I honestly love this fic my only complaints are that I think Kevin should of been a girl and that giving Jen magic kinda makes Glen irrelevant since in og series he can also do magic he just didn't try to do it

Cool chapter though are you trying to make a pseudo version of ben10mans Jen I’m sure you can be more original even with the names but if your just using a similar concept or ideas of events then okay I’m cool, looking forward to the next chapter

Nicely done :)

I can wait for more can you do alien force story please.

Keep on going this is getting good

I can’t wait for the next one

Finally, and great chapter I’m curious will Jen find out about the alien side of her family or will that still be in alien force

Please update the next chapter soon

Will you also have Max tell Jen about her anodite heritage?

Can’t wait to see season 2

Thumbs up and i hope Jen goes anodite at some point

I hope you continue this series! There's not a lot of fem!Ben 10 fics out there and this stuff is really good

Love the story

Good job.

Great story man