| Reviews for From the Shadows |
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Lizi Rose chapter 14 . 8/16/2013 IT'S SO SWEET! |
ravanstrawberry chapter 14 . 11/15/2012 Please continue! |
Crystal-Wolf-Guardain-967 chapter 13 . 3/17/2012 i loved it! can't wait for more! |
Sorrowful Cheshire chapter 1 . 11/21/2011 is this a yaoi? |
Aubreianna chapter 12 . 4/15/2005 Hey, I really like the story so far, but I had a hard time reading it. Look out for commas and possive words (the ones with apostrophies. Also try to not use the same phrases more that once in a paragraph or sentence (ie:Seeing Jean give the younger teen a steadying hand as he staggered Kurt could see he wasn’t the only one who had being to take a liking to the teen. Obviously he wasn’t the only one who could the teen had a lot of potential; alls he needed was a guiding hand.) in that sentence (which i don't own, he he) you used "see" and "teen" a lot (and teenager might be better. I know, im picky. On a brighter side, I was REALLY impressed with your dialoge (something I really have trouble with). anyway, update soon. |
the blue fuzzball chapter 11 . 3/17/2005 one word, perfect! please finish it? please? im begging you! |
JWink chapter 11 . 1/7/2004 good story, hope you continue soon |
sweet lassitude chapter 10 . 8/31/2003 hey- nice chapter. natalia is the other mutant, right? cool idea. keep up the great work and please update soon! ~*ShadowJax*~ _ |
Katrina S. Forest chapter 5 . 8/27/2003 Very good so far. Your descriptions are a bit lengthy and somewhat vague, but your capture of the character's personalities is very good. I'll review again as I finish the story. So far nice job. -Katrina |
emptyaccount2011 chapter 8 . 7/3/2003 Plese put more up |
Rhona1 chapter 8 . 7/3/2003 Wow, i love this story! Its so good! I always review cos i love it soo much! Please write the next chapter soon! Please! Great story! Bye, Rhona. |
NamelessMoonshine chapter 8 . 7/3/2003 COL! KURT GOTSED DA KISSY-FACE! |
Rhona1 chapter 7 . 6/24/2003 I always love to read the newest chapter, and this one had to be one of my favourites! I love the whole story! I've reviewed about 4 times now or something, which is very good! _ I love reading your stories they're soo good! i can't wait for the next chapter! Bye, Rhona! |
Key chapter 7 . 6/24/2003 ... |
Key chapter 6 . 6/24/2003 does she know what nightcrawler looks like? |