Reviews for The Demon Inside
BROMBROS chapter 16 . 7/24
Okay so you skipped over In Flitwick's classroom after Dean trained to fly and jump to Herbology with Professor Sprout
Safira chapter 17 . 7/2
Please continue your story is amazing
Guest chapter 5 . 6/15
the teacher's names reminded of the the characters in Recess.
Guest chapter 3 . 6/15
Why are you did Lily give Harry the last name Potter. James died. Crowley killed him.
LeapLoverForever chapter 2 . 5/12
to defeat the huns.
NazgulBelserion chapter 11 . 5/2
Ya I'm out this is disgusting a son of a demon acting like a little bitch the same kid that tortured and killed people like wtf make up your mind if you wanted canon Harry then don't change anything
NazgulBelserion chapter 9 . 5/2
I detest the Potter in he's name it's dumb
NazgulBelserion chapter 3 . 5/2
Why the hell is he a Potter makes no sense
Stormshadow13 chapter 17 . 4/24
Fun chapter. Harry is a great flyer. Can not wait for a game.
Aqua Lilly chapter 6 . 4/23
I honestly think Harry went OP too quick. By having him beat his father who is many, many times more experienced and wise lose in training at the begining of Harry's journey, it leaves no room for him to grow. It doesn't give us and Harry a mile stone to measure his progress.

If he were to get his ass handed to him this chapter and then over the years grow stronger and more experienced until one day when he's a teenager, he is finally able to go toe to toe with his father, with the victory being a close call? Well, the reader will feel that overwhelming feeling of true victory. Harry's success will feel even more real. Remember, character milestones are important.
SkylerHollow chapter 17 . 4/23
Thanks for the chapter.
JabberwockyM chapter 16 . 4/10
I love this. A unique take and so well written.
Fangtasia21 chapter 16 . 3/30
If I saw one, I would just blink one line. Everyone has a different tolerance (I wouldn't be satisfied with even a possessed toilet, though I've seen The Shining too many times and read too many King works). I have a feeling, by the way, that Sam and Dean are still clashing Crowley and Lily for Harry.
Stormshadow13 chapter 16 . 3/29
Lol, fun chapter.
Dracowoman chapter 16 . 3/29
...well that scene happened
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