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Great story hope to see another chapter soon

Well, it's something, although the direction is becoming more confusing. One example being if Menma is going back to cocky self, or if the Hero Faction is trying to convince him that he is still stronger then Naruto, since Naruko would probably be busy trying to get back into Naruto's life.

Along with if anybody from any of the factions that have it in Naruto are trying to get some kind of revenge on him. Like if any of the Hyuga are beyond livid because Naruto decided to defend himself from Hiashi's believing that he was in the right. Or say, if the leadership is becoming more divided over how to deal with Naruto, along with how to control the power they consider a threat to themselves.

Another thing is to please fill in some gaps, show if Minato at least tried to punish Sakura and Ino for what they tried to do to Naruko, or purposely ignored it in order to to punish Naruko for being saved by Naruto.

tnx 4 the chapter

I like it

I still dont get this story direction..

fun chapter

this was ruined by having rias be with some one other than naruto in my opinion

Some of the sentences in your story feels incomplete like there is a missing word or two.

Oh my god... I'm through with this story, your grammar and writing skills are absolutely atrocious and your story is impossible to follow.

First you end EVERY chapter with a so-called 'Cliffhanger' but in the following chapter it starts with a time-skip, leaving no conclusion to these so-called 'Cliffhangers' and leaving the reader wondering WTF just happened?! I don't even know what's going on with the story, I know Naruto is hated by his family, but I don't know why, I know he is supposed to be a God Eater, but no explanation as to how. You throw up names, but no information on how Naruto knows these people, it's VERY poorly written.

Next is your grammar, there is no distinction between your sentences, no punctuation, your entire paragraphs are one giant run-on sentence with poor spelling to top it off.

Lastly, the Rias bashing, while I detest Rias bashing to start, I can read a story that paints Rias in a negative light so long as it's reasonable, such as a neglect fic. You however are just bashing her to bash her, you had Naruto sympathize with her in the previous chapter and now she's plotting on him again, hate to break it to all the Rias-Hate Club, but Rias s NOT that stupid, she's not going to throw herself into danger for no gain, which is exactly how you're portraying her, she has nothing to gain from pissing Naruto off, but she's doing it anyways, that's not Rias. I'm not only this way about Rias but pretty much any bashing, including Sakura Haruno, while I tolerate bashing to a degree, when you make the character into something they're not (In this case, Rias being an idiot), then it just becomes annoying. Only ONE character in the history of anime/manga deserves that type of bashing, Sasuke Uchiha, because he IS an idiot, he got his revenge on Itachi and proceeded to join a terrorist organization to further make himself a world enemy, he killed Danzo and then plotted on Konoha AGAINST PEOPLE WHO HAD NOTHING TO DO WITH HIS FAMILY'S GENOCIDE! Then AFTER defeating Kaguya, he attacks the Kages and Naruto for some fucked up wannabe Code Geass style 'Revolution', and even continuing on in Boruto, he has a DAUGHTER who inherited his SHARINGAN, and not only does he completely fucking ignore the one chance to rebuild his clan, he doesn't even open his mouth to confirm Sakura was her mother and not Karin at one point, I mean COME THE FUCK ON! That's the only person in Anime/Manga who deserves relentless bashing, not even Madara or Obito deserve to be bashed like that, and that says something!

great chapter.

Great story continue as soon as possible please

Interesting

pfft poor Sasuke chan

Esdeath with draconian horns.

...nice.