| Reviews for Dungeon Oratoria Online |
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WwEpsilonwW chapter 20 . 9/6 This isn't your fault, because it's totally on me but, I find myself dying inside every time Leafa gets a POV. |
SaintInfernalNeos chapter 33 . 9/2 First of all, yay, this story is back after so long :D! Second, good setup chapter, even if poor Kirito continues spending most of the story getting beaten up by someone than actually being relevant...guess that's what happens when you put him in a setting as filled with big players as Danmachi is, huh? Regarding his brief meeting with Danmachi's fox waifu, aka Haruhime (Hopefully I can keep the name in mind now XP), it's not actually that crazy to think he would go to such lengths...Kirito, after all, with just a couple hours of knowing Alice S30, realized he already was more than willing to even fight against Eugeo, his best friend, for her own right to live compared to Alice Zuberg. So him getting ready to save fox waifu just for being sad feels quite fitting, even if Take Familia's reactions caught me off-guard, probably as my lack of deeper Danmachi knowledge keeps showing. And damn, poor Asuna gets another trauma, because OF COURSE a character can't spend an arc here without getting some soul-troubling issue after having achieved some happiness. Sigh... On a happier note, congrats to Liz! She has found her own path, her determination and her feelings...I'm proud of her. This is the only girl that in Canon, after all, stated her feelings for Kirito out loud (Even if never to his face) twice long after he and Asuna got together. Only one that surpasses it is Sugu being the only one who said it to his face, even if in such a heartbreaking moment that it didn't quite count in that vein, sadly. Only sad thing this chapter was not much shown of the girls' reactions to Kirito's injured state, though maybe that's getting bundled for the next one when they also react to his decision? Hopefully it's nothing too bad, the drama has been high enough without that lately. Also, Hermes is still a shady bastard, Freya is always overconfident, and Kayaba keeps seemingly being so useless all his existence does is overcomplicate things...that can't be good O,O |
RizomataNyan chapter 33 . 9/1 finally catch up with the latest chapter, you know i think it will be nice if you tone down the drama's a lil bit, this fanfic is good, but the ammount of dramas in it is a lil bit too much, there is a drama every goddamn chapter,and any joke made in this always end up with sourness, its to the point you might as well remove the adventure tag and replace it with Drama tag, having a drama occasionally is good but too much and it become an hurtcomfort/angst fic. Again don't get me wrong this a genuienly good fanfic albet filled with Dramafest. |
apacho1999 chapter 33 . 9/1 You’ve no idea how long this month was |
Zehel2010 chapter 33 . 9/1 Hmm, as I recall, Kirito maxed his extra skill about hand to hand combat in Aincrad. If other skills aside from magic bleed over, then two weeks should be enough. Question is, is Kirito the only one with such effect? Poh in alicization is damn scary fellow. |
SentinalSlice chapter 33 . 9/1 Aww. No Bell this time. |
WwEpsilonwW chapter 1 . 8/25 I thought Tsubaki was a half amazon half dwarf? |
EternalKing chapter 32 . 8/13 I’ll probably get to a more in depth review later, but all I’ll say is that Bell(Fake) and Hestia are probably the worst characters written here. There’s no way Bell shouldn’t be getting along with Kirito, and there’s no way Hestia would be acting this way to either of them plus the familia, both their characters are really reaching levels of “I can’t continue this anymore”. Not to mention it feels like conflict for the sake of adding in extra things to “canon” danmachi. As for Kirito, just get rid of the usual harem “will they, won’t they” and make it a “yes they are”, because it would actually make the story stand out if Kirito and just gets with all of them. Like, he got with Asuna because he nearly died, that should absolutely extend here to the other girls(even Hestia, since he wouldn’t have Bell’s problem of goddess worship plus not liking the idea of God/Human relationships) especially since it’s not as if they would have major problems with it besides trying to get used to it. It’s not that much of a stretch, and people who dislike the average harem antics will be relieved of some of their irritation while those who have a ‘best girl’ will be able to enjoy heartwarming scenes and development. |
apacho1999 chapter 32 . 8/11 Ok, so i binged through the whole story and... I find it amazing! I really like how you handle the characters and the canon story while adding your own turn, also the thing you did with all the high level adventures was quite bold move in your part and I love everything about it. Not gonna lie tho, I have quite the mixed feelings about what you are doing to Bell’s character, but that’s just because I really like cannon Bell. I can kind of guess what you are going for with his characters and interactions with Kirito (Bell getting frustrated at the fact that Kirito Leveled up is basically a parallel of when Ais became level 6). I only hope we can get our ball of sunshine back . ! But if that is not what you are going for, well... your fic, your plot! I will probably stick around anyways. (You probably noticed but I got really excited when Bell got first mentioned in a chapter). You are doing a Good work. Keep it up! |
taimurpro chapter 32 . 8/10 This Is Amazing I read it and it was such a good experience The fighting How the dungoen works The suspence The romance The struggles The characters The dialogue and jokes I love dis and i am happy I stumbled upon it Though i do have several issues Firstly U do soemtimes confuse names like Welf ans Klien when Liz was being taught by Welf Second issue Where is freya man xD Thirdly WHERE IS THE LAP PILLOW FOR SYR :((((( Otherwise i am content with the story Sxcited to see more and see where hestia and Kirito go Such a cool and gud story |
The-Anti-Akuma chapter 28 . 7/31 Honestly i'm positive i'm going to keep reading this story for a long time now, I left a review a while back about not really being able to handle how much Harem BS there was, but it calmed down after a handful of chapters. I'm glad I stuck with the story. |
The-Anti-Akuma chapter 22 . 7/31 I would like to point out that one of the sections in this chapter is marked 'Welf:' when it's Klein's PoV |
The-Anti-Akuma chapter 17 . 7/30 I think I realized what Aura does... It's the Protagonist Aura... |
The-Anti-Akuma chapter 14 . 7/29 I just realized that we still haven't seen Kirito's Level up status. |
The-Anti-Akuma chapter 12 . 7/29 It kills me how Bell got stats with S/SS/SSS each level, and i'm not sure if our MC got a single A... Grrr |