I enjoyed this chapter! The interactions among the Lamb's Club were very well-done and entertaining. I think you've definitely nailed all of their characterizations. It's been a minute since I watched your play-through, but I was keenly reminded of all their portrayals in the game, and I think you nailed them all. They even speak exactly like they did in the game.

Every mention of Angela's absence was poignant. I can sense that despite everything, they really miss their friend.

Meeting Anna was interesting. I loved the interview scene, a lot of great detail there. I'll admit, perhaps there was a little too much detail for the scene to be framed as a memory. I became so invested in the conversation that I kept forgetting we were supposed to be situated at the Vaults & Garden in the present. But each setting taken individually was very well-established and both scenes captivating.

I'm very intrigued to see how you unravel this whole mystery. I'm already demanding to know where those boxes are going if not to Scotland, as well as how Sam and David are going to end up in Scotland instead. Looking forward to more!

Hey, there. Wow, I really liked this! I do hope to see it continue soon. Those last couple paragraphs definitely got me. It’s safe to say Sam had a certain affection for David judging by how protective she was of him; I like that you’re having that reciprocated here. And man, do I love Helena. What a fun character. And the dynamic between her and Sam is super enjoyable.