Damn. This is a nice story not gonna lie although the diction could be a little better in my opinion( as in some proper english) but the slangy english is nicely done as well.

Ending was pretty sweet as well and the whole story in general is a fun story to read

Keep it up :)))

Thank you for this story! Love it!

That's it? Where's the final smut scene with Vi you asshole?

Fuck man... Fuck...

This chapter had me

C'mon i need the happy ending!

"I read this in one evening" rated 10/10

Amazing story, love the writing, devoured it in less than a day. Keep it up, you are doing great!

Good job rambiggitybiggitybiggitybiggity

Different style of writing but I'm into it. Imagine being that comfortable with your friends to be able to talk about shit like that. I like this. Can't wait for the next chap. Should be... Interesting...

See this shit right here? This is why I love your shit. Just this whole damn chap...

Alright next mastapiece from ya boi and I don’t regret finally following the email I got to get here. God I love your stories dude, this shits the best.

This is the best story I've read in a long time, keep it up.

Uhh...is this still a T rating? Who am I to talk about ratings, though...

I was expecting virginity graduation for both... I hope we don't have to wait long for that