Hey dude it's really great that you are writing this awsome story at a time like this alongwith doing your project. I would seriously advice you to read your own story as that will give you the motivation you need to write. I would know for one as I spend a lot of time reading different and interesting stories written by anyone and most of them have the same doubt as you. But never fear as everyone has different opinions and while some might criticize your work many are out there who love it starting with you yourself.

I get it you need some inspiration to keep writing but once you find the firey passion write it down in your story I know that we’re living in hard times but don’t give up.

wait I thought there was gonna be a re-write

oaky so issues here

1.) cynthia is a champion, there is no way in hell, that even as powerful as solaris' garchomp is, that it can defeat her garchomp that easily. i am not saying she has to win, but there is no way she would lose that easily.

2.) ash's pokemon should not be getting smacked around as easily as they are by soalris, while i am not saying they should crush him, the fights are to one sided most of the time.

3.) ash and victoria are talking about marriage way to soon.

4.) el being a man of arceus is pretty screwed up, because i cannot see arceus allowing team meteor to destroy and pollute the earth like they are doing.

5.) not gonna lie ash not having aura, or legendaries is kind of a letdown, but i still gave this a chance, sadly it doesn't appeal to me. not to mention, while i have no problem with victoria, i would have preferred an ash/harem of females, especially with how beautiful the women in reborn are, along with a select few from outside reborn

6.) dropping this fic now, sorry but these are all turn off points for me.

solaris can't one shot cynthia's gacrchomp thats ridiculous

you are making them way op especially the ditto, because while ditto can copy a pokemon, i don't think it gets their stats and it had to have seen arceus in order to transform into it, also arceus was literally born from nothing, and into nothing, which means time and space didn't exist so therefore arceus could not have been born in the reborn region, because it would not have existed yet

i know you can't in the game, but i wish ash caught the steelix

imma take it that 'El' is a part of team meteor

tbh this whole gym, leader, and town gave me a headache lol

pretty sure charloette is older than all of them, except maybe ash and victoria

yeah the solaris fight was bullshit sorry but i refuse to believe solaris was that powerful, especially considering what ash's pokemon have been through and me personally? i would have slept with ame when she offered it, or at least flirted back lol

i hope what the traitors did gets out to everyone and they all get blacklisted lmfao

well technically speaking, she never said they had to be 6 badges from the reborn region, and therefore since ash has 60 badges from the other regions, the trophy from beating drake of the orange league, and the frontier symbols from the kanto battle frontier, which could be considered badges of their own, that actually makes like 68, i think? so really he has more than enough badges, at least that is my reasoning, lol

yes you should, and see this would be a perfect reason/excuse to give him suicune lol

im sure one of ash's pokemon could have destroyed the boulder, also does ash's muk have some secret kink or fetish, that makes it want to mate and or breed with humans or something? because it has been somewhat attached to two humans now, and both were professors?