Okay, here is part 2. I've been too excited about the piano music apparently and posted the review much too soon.. XD

Well...where have I been? Right, Ray closed the blinds, because he's the MVP. wbk.

I love how Donna is hesitant at first, because she would be, but Harvey is Harvey and he pushes all the right buttons and WHAT IS HE DOING WITH HIS HAND? EXCUSE ME? and "when I can do it right here?" OKAY.

"My mind hasn't not been set on this since you almost killed me the other time." THE OTHER TIME! I love Darvey and their other times. And I also love it, because said "other time" sparked the idea for this fic. 3

"We have fifteen minutes tops until we arrive at the restaurant." - "Sounds like a challenge." - "One you apparently are gonna get to take." KLJHDKHG WHAT IS THIS PARALLEL?! ITS GENIUS!

The whole dialogue from the first to the last word, and everything in between, is once again 206% Darvey like in all of your fics, but it needs to be said.

AND HARVEY CONTINUES TO DO HIS MAGIC I HATE HIM and you just write it like no other... seriously... the Harvey from Donna's perspective in your fics is the WORST!

"We might not even need ten." Seriously!?

THIS KISS! I don't know how you do it that this kiss is making me feel all the feels! Like HOW? Honestly, I could literally quote everything again, because you describe what Harvey is doing and Donna is feeling in a way that makes my heartrate speed up and my water.. I mean my ovaries scream and dear lord.

One part I absolutely HAVE TO point out though, is the "button part", as I want to call it, my little wish come true and one HIGHLIGHT of this oneshot. Armor, superhero cape, second skin... all so TRUE and making the act of her opening his waistcoat that much HOTTER than it already is JESUS CHRIST only to continue with her admiring what lays beneath: "Every inch of perfect and imperfect skin. Every crease. Every line. Every visible and invisible scar and every spot of perfection. The hardness. And the softness. And all the secrets only I know." If this isn't one of the most amazing things Donna ever said to him. *tearymoji* it's like an "I love you just like you are" and I'm fine.

"His heat is the fuel to her fire, every further touch a burning spark in their souls." One example of those fantastic sentences and images you create with words. "the wildfire that is burning them alive." It's so sensual and hot and intense and fantastic!

"Told you we could do it in under fifteen minutes." KJSFJGS THE SMUG IDIOT I HATE HIM. I can hear this so clearly and even though it's not the classic pillow talk, it belongs to my list of favorite pillow talk quotes. (I should make such a list! XD)

SPEAKING OF LISTS! MUSIC TO MY EARS BECAUSE IT MEANS MORE TUF CHAPTERS RIGHT?!

Okay, you know I love Ray BUT WHY DOES HE NEED TO INTERRUPT HARVEY HERE? You're so sneaky! XD 3

"Harvey, on the other hand, fails miserably at looking unfazed" Why is this canon like this whole thing is? looool
Just like both of them giggling like teenagers when they arrive home. It's so them and so disgusting. I hate them both with my whole heart.

I can never thank you enough for taking us on this intense and magical ride with them. For giving this idea a try and making it into this wonderful and special story that adds to the TUF series perfectly!
Thank you and love you! xoxo

I haven't written a review for this chapter yet, but that doesn't mean that I haven't thought of this new installment of the Fantasy Series every day since I first read it. Because I have, and how could I not? I mean, SERIOUSLY?!

I just KNEW you could make this idea of them doing it in the car (with Ray driving them no less...) work somehow, and OF COURSE you absolutely blew my mind with it.

First, the idea of the new car as an interim solution is SO believable and perfect and literally like a character of its own in this oneshot. I love it! The way you describe it through Donna's eyes makes me want to take a ride with it as well and enjoy its luxury. And considering the level of luxury you describe it's very plausible that it has those fancy blinds that separate the driver from the backseat area. Which is a very important feature for this story! XD

And right after we (Donna and I) are set up with the car, you turn the heat on: "Harvey wearing her favorite dark-gray colored three-piece while she had donned a maroon-colored dress" with a zipper jahkjshf all over the front, of course. UGH! Just the fact that they already start the day of their weekly date night by dressing up for it in the morning makes me want to SCREAM!

The way you describe them being hot and bothered all day and Harvey BREATHING INTO HER EAR THAT HE CANT WAIT TO GET HOME KJSHD WTF and nothing really happened yet! But your build up of the over all energy ("ever-expanding cloud of energy", so well put!) for what's about to happen is done so amazingly well and the tension is so palpable!

"Harvey laughs at something Ray had said" IM STILL LAUGHING LOL!

When Harvey has finally escaped Faye and joins Donna in the car, I already told you how much I love that you give him time to "settle" and maybe that's the most normal and logical thing to do in this scene, but I notice these transitions that are so very well done very often in your fics and it makes them always feel so real!

Then, Harvey has settled and you flip the switch and we're all in for a ride...
"Stop looking at me like I'm some kind of snack" ÖLSJFJD I CANT

Donna saying "It's just a dress" and Harvey later replying the very same about his suit LOOOL is both of them being my favorite idiots! XD

As if the situation alone wouldn't be enough, Ray puts on some PIANO music! Are you having no compassion with my poor nerves? jhgsgsf

Water Is not this wet.
H O T

OMG! It is soooo hot and perfectly written!
xx

Ohmigod this was so fricking hot wow! When he fucks her harder and harder and she brings herself over the edge while rubbing her clit asdfghpihwf I am dead!

Loved this! Thanks for writing!

*settles down with a bottle of cold water, again*

NATHALIE! Tell me this. How is it that with ever re-read of this, it only gets HOTTER AND HOTTER?

Let's start with the only non-living thing in this chapter - THAT CAR. The way you describe it and the luxury that it exudes made me feel like I was literally in that space with Donna. It's your absolute forte - you set the scene and plonk the reader right in the middle of it, tell them to buckle up and then... ZOOOOM!

The second Harvey climbs into the car, my heart started hammering. Because, whether I'm reading him on a page or watching him on screen, that man makes me (and Donna, duh!) weak. And your words make it just that much more irresistible. Like I've previously told you, I'm a big fan of Donna POV stories - scratch that, YOUR Donna POV stories - because you use her as the perfect vessel to tell us just how much in love she is with Harvey and how he affects her - both physically and emotionally. Please never stop writing them this way.

And then, hooooo boy, the way you write them - from Harvey's sexy persuasive tactics to the way Donna is unable to resist it, and the way both of them are affected by what they're wearing - especially the way Donna describes what she sees in Harvey's suits all had my insides curling with delight.

But, you know what I love the most? It's just the fact that you've also highlighted the domesticity and the routines of their life - from them keeping their date no matter what to them just simply cuddling at home on his sofa are all details that I cannot get enough of. Because THAT more than anything is who they are. Just two people who... fit.

Thank you so much for writing this and for pulling me along for the adventure.

All my love,
Caro
xoxo

You're back with this one, yeah! You're writing is so good. Loved the new chapter, now I need a cold shower

3 words: water is wet

This was all kinds of hot!

Crikey this was hot! I mean really hot... I needed a cold shower after that chapter.

You write this kind of stuff so beautifully. Sexiness, desire, heat, passion but always intermingled with emotion, love and tenderness too. It is a real skill and I always, love reading it.

Thank you for this surprise update. It has already made my day!

Awesome!

Beyond hot!

I love it! Hot and soft at the same time!

Firstly it was a surprise when I saw this update,the first thing came to my mind was last time they were in a Car and I don't know how Nathalie gonna proceed with more different scenarios this time,but Girl! You came through! I mean firstly I love how you come up with something new and breathtaking always and your writing makes any simple plot 1000 times more appealing. The passion yet the softness ,the sizzling chemistry yet their lovable anecdotes to each other it was a treat to read this one.

Also the love making part , I love when Donna takes the charge and Harvey just follows through ,you never explicitly make them talk what they are doing yet we as readers always get the chill that what is really going on there, that's the magic you always put into their stories .

Also it was so freaking steamy and hot ,I needed a cold shower after that and ran here to tell you about this ️

Harvey Specter does look very good in a suit. This chapter was so sexy. I cannot wait for more.

I love this! it's so freaking HOT and romantic! I hope you continue writing about their fantasies!