Reviews for Cheering Up Prime
Guest chapter 1 . 8/9/2019
ADORABLE
Julien Caeg chapter 1 . 8/9/2019
Super adorable and cute! Love it, mate. Please keep up the good work. EmeraldMoonGreen and I also have stories in mind that we wanted for you to write, but for the moment, we'll let you take a break for a while. I don't have much to request you but I'm letting you get some time off for these few days. I had a fun blast reading these amazing stories, my friend.

A big very thank you very much for you. Well done and keep up the good work.
~ Julien Caeg ~
EmeraldMoonGreen chapter 1 . 8/8/2019
Oh no...I got another story idea. It's too soon, but I gotta share it!

So I was thinking that maybe Arcee is having a very bad day because its close to the day Cliffjumper passed, making everyone else avoid her to avoid having her go off, but unfortunately Smokey doesn't know that and while they are all gathered in the refueling lounge (except Optimus) he starts to innocently ask her if she's okay, and whats bothering her. Arcee suddenly and very loudly snaps at him, saying things like he shouldn't be an Autobot, that all he does is screw up and cause problems and messes that the rest of them have to clean up or fix, basically that he is completely worthless; and she would say more, except a VERY unhappy/furious Prime shouts her name and says thats enough, she calms down and realizes that everyone is looking at her in horrified shock, which makes her look to Smokey. Smokey is staring at her with wide, tear filled optics and his doorwings pinned flat against his back, he's shaking fairly hard and whimpering softly, and when someone (maybe Bee) tries to reach out to him, he bursts into loud tears and flees the room while sobbing harshly and shoving past Optimus, he even leaves the Base.
Arcee gets a major scolding from Optimus, who then goes out to find Smokey, and when he does he finds him covered in dirt and dust and grime and crying very very hard. Even when Optimus scoops him up in his arms and holds him, Smokey can't stop crying and Optimus ends up holding him for over an hour before Smokey manages to stop crying, but Smokey is still hiccuping and coughing weakly. Optimus asks Ratchet for a bridge and has to carry Smokey back, where Ratchet gives him a quick check up (Smokey has a sore throat and is very subdued and quiet the whole time) and fixes him up. But Optimus takes Smokey to get cleaned and has to help him wash up because of how exhausted he is, and Optimus is concerned with how quiet and lifeless he is, because Smokey doesn't do anything even when Optimus cleans ticklish spots (like he can't even feel it), so he brings Smokey to his own room to keep an eye on him. Smokey cuddles against Optimus and whimpers whenever Optimus shifts, thinking that the Prime is going to leave him alone, but he eventually falls asleep, but cries most of the time he's out.
The next morning, Optimus decides to cheer him up with lots of playful tickles and teasing, paying special attention to his tummy (nuzzling and raspberries and gobbling him up) to make him extra smiley and giggly, maybe even saying things like "Daddy's going to get you" and stuff like that. Maybe Smokey even struggles, but makes it very obvious that he wants more tickles, moving so Optimus can get all his tickle spots and even holding Optimus's helm against his tummy. And Optimus only stops when Smokey is in tears and promises that he won't be sad anymore.
And Arcee will definitely apologize, because no one but Optimus and Ratchet have ever seen him cry, but no one has ever seen him as upset as he had been.

Can you pretty please do this one? I had the thought and it won't go away. I'm sure you'll be able to make this idea better than i'm imagining it. Let me know if you can't please! :)
Katherine10 chapter 1 . 8/8/2019
Hello there! I absolutely adore your stories, they cheer me up whenever I'm having a bad day at school; I never fail at smiling when I read your works, thank you for bringing some joy to my days. :)

And I was hoping to request a story...if it's not too much trouble? I love your Optimus being a father to Bee and Smokey stories; and I was thinking that maybe Optimus see's Smokescreen sneaking out of base every night and not returning until dawn, and becomes suspicious, so one night while everyone else goes to sleep, he confronts him and demands an answer. Maybe Smokescreen refuses, so Optimus "interrogates" him, with lots and lots and LOTS of tickling (mostly "eating" him and raspberries, cause that is super cute), and maybe he discovers a ticklish spot worse than all his other ones. I was thinking his doorwings and where they connect to his back, like maybe when Optimus accidentally brushes them with his fingers, Smokescreen just shrieks and literally jumps off the floor and away from Optimus, then looks at him in terror/excitement. Optimus could pin him down and just ever so lightly tickle him there, and Smokey would shriek and scream and squeal and flail his limbs around like a hyper kid; and maybe Optimus goes for the "kill" and blows raspberries and eats his doorwings to really make him laugh. Smokey would be literally sobbing laughter and only able to twitch weakly by the time Optimus stops, and he'd of course rush to tell Optimus was he wanted to know to avoid more tickles; I was thinking that he was sneaking out because he found a nice place to stargaze away from base, or maybe he's been missing Cybertron and just wanted time to himself so he wouldn't be sad around base and worry anyone. And maybe it can end with Smokey falling asleep on Optimus after getting a few more gentle tickles to his neck and tummy?
I was also hoping that Smokescreen could call him Dad/Daddy while being tickled too, cause when I read that it made my heart ache from how cute it was.
Please tell me you can do it, I just know you will make it as wonderful as all your other stories!
The Princess Maker chapter 1 . 8/9/2019
My parents wold blow on my belly to make me laugh when I was little :D
EmeraldMoonGreen chapter 1 . 8/8/2019
My heart hurts from reading this, this was one of the cutest thing I’ve ever read! Thank you thank you thank you! :D
I can’t stop rereading it either! It just makes me giggle more and more each time! X3
I’m glad I could give you a cute, sweet idea to write, and I may have more in the future. Who knows? *giggles* But I’ll give you a break from them, cause at the moment I don’t really have any, except for a sequel to Totally Crushed...with all the Bots ganging up on and tickling Smokey to tears. XD