| Reviews for Emphasis on Redemption |
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  Guest chapter 11 . 10/7/2019 Bro please don’t abandon this story, it’s fucking awesome. I’ve been looking for a story like this for forever. Without Dutch and and Micah, so many of the gangs downfalls can be remedied. The dialogue between Hosea and Arthur as he learns to lead the Van Der Lin Gang is clearly have a great hold on the characterization of the gang as everything they do feels authentic. The possibilities are endlesss with this story, please don’t let this one go man it’s starting off amazing. |
 JimmyHall24 chapter 11 . 9/10/2019 Well shit lol |
| JimmyHall24 chapter 2 . 9/9/2019 Poor Arthur. |
| Nightwing1493 chapter 11 . 8/29/2019 Great chapter and it shows small changes already and how it’s not gonna be easy at all. |
| Ronin Kenshin chapter 11 . 8/24/2019 things are changing abit can't wait to see what else does good work |
| Ronin Kenshin chapter 8 . 8/24/2019 g00d w0rk |
| Ronin Kenshin chapter 7 . 8/24/2019 l0ve it |
| Ronin Kenshin chapter 5 . 8/23/2019 g00d ideas great w0rk |
| Ronin Kenshin chapter 4 . 8/23/2019 c00l changes g00d w0rk |
| Ronin Kenshin chapter 3 . 8/23/2019 nice twist good work |
| Ronin Kenshin chapter 2 . 8/23/2019 arthur would be a great leader because he cares for his fam first great work |
| Ronin Kenshin chapter 1 . 8/23/2019 awes0me start |
| Ronin Kenshin chapter 10 . 8/18/2019 awesome work can't wait to see what happens |
| Nightwing1493 chapter 10 . 8/18/2019 Wait so you are actually gonna kill off that rat? Please tell me that it happens cause it’ll make my day! |
| StrikeKT chapter 10 . 8/15/2019 Arthur snorted. "I don't know nothin' 'bout it. Just be sure to bring me a bottle!" I died of laughter at this sentence. Man, you're a genius! Please don't stop writing this. |
