Reviews for Chimeric lunar sea of steel
sawtooth44 chapter 16 . 1/27
guess i should of made a beta profile
Akasha Bloodriver chapter 16 . 1/27
Arturia has once again become king of her country (she has also won in other countries). It is certain that corrupt politicians do not stand a chance with Arturia. It is good that Arturia now sees herself as a human and more as a monster.

It's funny to see that this world has become more peaceful thanks to the Servants and Hakuno who must intervene on everything.

So there is a Camelot 2. And Arturia who wants to put Hakuno as ruler of the Earth in addition to the Moon Cell. XD Iskandar is right, Hakuno has just stolen his title of King of the conquerors. And Altera has fallen in love with akHakuno since she released her from Velber.

The last lines still speak to Hakuno trying to escape. XD
Boyzilla chapter 16 . 1/27
Of course not! Even Lovecraftian horrors shall bend to the power of her head tilt! Still, happy to see you’ve now gone and worshipped Hakuno that you may never stop writing her! (Mwahaha! Welcome to the Church of Hakuno!)

This story was quite a refresher for me, there is a difference between writing a story and reading one. And it was relaxing to be the reader in a Hakuno story with similarities to my Digital Human Series, even if it was relatively short, it was quite enjoyable. I look forward to your other works of Hakuno Kishinami, Inheritor of the Moon Cell!
Boyzilla chapter 15 . 1/20
Next chapter is the last!? D;

Oh well, I’ve very much enjoyed this tale! This chapter was quite lovely. Also it was adorable when Saber carried Hakuno across the battle; perhaps I’ll use that sometime in Lunar Hearth. But, using the power of the full Regalia, Hakuno will free Altera!

And then Hakuno will rule the world as the most adorable little squirrel! Haha
sawtooth44 chapter 15 . 1/19
next time, please get a beta so they can fix up translation errors

everyone has been asking for you to do this from basically day one
Akasha Bloodriver chapter 15 . 1/19
In addition, Arturia has had its capabilities enhanced since it has been invoked in England. It does him a favor and so does Hakuno.

Fortunately, Hakuno managed to convince the crews to opt for his plan and that of Rider.

Richelieu 3 who calls Hakuno "little squirrel", this nickname will follow Hakuno in any world.

It is still a blow for Archer to see that this Arturia does not know him.

I think that ďHakuno's jealousy would be even greater if she knew that during her life, when Shirou was a Master, she was in love with urArturia.

Leo must have been happy to see the legendary King Arthur in action. And when a powerful Servant like Arturia has for Master a mage as strategic as Hakuno, you get the ultimate master / Servant duo.

Arturia made me laugh with the way she refused Iskandar. At the same time, Iskandar had to be on the side of the Moon Cell, ends up with Altera after losing and there he wants to join the ďArturia side. For Arturia, Iskandar is not reliable and it is understandable.

To say that Altera is blocked because of his sword.

At least Hakuno has recovered powerful allies. I think Arturia doesn't want ďIskandar too because it pisses him off.

Hakuno therefore succeeded in freeing Altera.

I'm sure if Hakuno asked Arturia if she wanted her in the ranks, Arturia will quickly accept it. Between her kindness which leads her enemies to become allies and the fact that she is a strategist, Hakuno will be very useful for the Round Table.

I look forward to reading the epilogue.
Boyzilla chapter 14 . 1/2
Ah! Now I understand, it’s your personal Archer. My first playthrough was with Saber, but I’ve played all the Servants with Female Hakuno multiple times that I view all of them equally. I did something similar with Digital/Extra.

Haha, speaking of which, I spotted the references to other Hakuno stories there (Digital Human Quantem Timelock included, my series is in its own ‘timeline’ collectiln.) it made me grin there.

Hakuno performed a shift, probably a smart choice there. That was a dangerous move though, good thing the Moon Cell is pretty OP, haha. Then again, Velber (and by proxy Umbral Star) is incredible dangerous to match. Now she will pull off a wonderous victory (by way of EX NP Head Tilt! Altera won’t be able to resist!)
sawtooth44 chapter 14 . 1/2
im saying that hakuno dosent normally have the ability to make checkpoints
Akasha Bloodriver chapter 14 . 1/1
Happy new year to you too.

I did not expect to see Archimedes.

Wasn't there a wink for Lunar Heart?

The Quantum Jump is very effective for this kind of problem.

When I read the description of the Servant that Hakuno wanted to invoke, I immediately thought of Arturia. In addition, she is in her clothes from her time as king with the crown and the cape.

It is logical that Arturia does not remember ďArcher. It is not the same servant.

The prophecy the world wanted to come true has been made thanks to Hakuno.

I did not expect Arturia to kneel. I mean, we've never seen him do it before.

We find ourselves again in the battlefield. But this time, it will take another turn.

It seems to me that Leo supports it in this fiction. If there is Gauvin too, I can't wait for Gauvin and Arturia to meet.
sawtooth44 chapter 13 . 12/19/2019
HAHA! shes learned from me has she? good ol Change Fate
although shes got more time to retry, i can do it faster
Akasha Bloodriver chapter 13 . 12/18/2019
Velber will always find a way to contaminate someone or something in order to achieve his ends.

The other way to know what the Gauls are afraid of is to look at Asterix. XD

I bet Waver and Iskandar don't expect Hakuno to be this young.

Hakuno you should talk about how you feel when you think it's a bad idea. Your life and all living things are at stake.

Between the luck of Tang E ďArcher and Hakuno who is a real magnet for trouble, they form a duo bin of unlucky people.

Archer is very loyal to Hakuno. I feel like I hear Rin yelling at his Archer for not being as loyal to her. XD In addition, since Archer had Arturia as Servant when he was alive, she had to palier ďIskandar, including where Archer suspect his proposal.

I look forward to reading more.
Boyzilla chapter 13 . 12/18/2019
Heh, I know its a fandom joke with the E Rank luck, but its incorrect for Nameless, who had D Rank Luck in exhange for lowered Independant Action Rank.

Still, not surprised Hakuno was caught unaware. She didn’t have enough information, but that’s where she shines, in gathering the crucial info during the first few conflicts needed for a fantastic underdog victory later on.
ultima-owner chapter 12 . 12/3/2019
that is so cute
PikaMew1288 chapter 5 . 12/3/2019
Imagine just how happy Francis Drake would be to be dropped into One Piece?
Akasha Bloodriver chapter 12 . 12/3/2019
I think anyone would be shocked to see a giant egg talking.

Hakuno finally meets the main hero.

Hyuga fell under the spell ďHakuno. XD
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