AWW! Lightpaw and Brokenpaw are so cute! I SHIP ITTTTTTTT lol IK I’m not the only one

" Since we're not...mates..." Not yet anyways!

I admire ypur persistance in this story 3 you've come so far, 46 chapters!? That's so crazy! I know in the last couple chapters you have been wondering if you should quit the book but in my opinion you should keep going. Not just because of my curiosity of the ending( which I am very curious btw) but because your so far in the book! You don't want all that time and effort wasted do you?
Okay enough ranting, I do enjoy your book and can't wait to see how everything will turn out for Brokenpaw

Ahem... Darkclaw is Scar from The Lion King. This entire situation reminds me of that scene where Mufasa dies, Was that intended at all lol or is it just me being weird?

You did that really well. I was as oblivious to that as Brokenpaw. I mean I'd had my suspicions from the start, but...
Good Job!

*Into the Unknown intensifies*

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I'm new and I didn't see the page-turner so I just read the stuff on the front and was really confused.

Poor Riverclan...at first I was upset about them taking sunning rocks but it really looks like they need it. By the way you write Ace just way I imagined him. Him and Spottedpaw are so cute3, they would have cute kits...well if they could that is, it is possible though very rare for a tortoiseshell tom produce kits, either way they're one of my favorite couples.
Dang it Brokenpaw can't you see Lightpaw likes you lol, I'm still rooting for them two even if they never end up together, anyways thank you for the chapters I really enjoy reading them(when I'm not busy anyways) and as always can't wait for the next chapter!

I forgot Featherfern was like a mother figure to Brokenpaw, and she definitely was one in this chapter.
But omg you totally took it there! The relationship between Twisted and Brokenpaw I mean. When I read that my heart jumped lol. Now that Twisted is sharing a nest with Brokenpaw it is totally easier for her to kill him...in his sleep or something lol. Also poor Lightpaw, my heart goes out to her...
Anyways thank you for your quick updates(I still don't know how you do it!) and can't wait for the next chapter

Oh no! Thunderclan lost! How horrible... I have to agree with Crowfoot though... kill those rogues!
Willowpaw and Brackenpaw are being sneaky lol I kinda ship them... unles their brother and sister, I can't remember
Thanks for the two chapters! And can't wait for the next one as always!

Hey! I really like this story. However one thing did bother me. When it says “when cats of opposite genders like each other[...]” I am Bisexual and would love it if this was worded differently :)

Uh oh, Darkstar as Spottedpaws mentor? I wonder how that's gonna turn out... Also the assessment made me wonder how old Brokenpaw is lol.
Anyways thanks for the update and can't wait for the next chapter

Yesss #TeamLightpaw all the way. Poor Brokenpaw he's falling in love with his assassin, sweet tom into bad girls? lol. I wonder how far you'll take that "relationship", gosh my curiosity is killing me. You know I still wonder what happened to Shadowstar, I'm leaning more she got killed but I don't know. Anyways thank you for the chapter! And as always I'll be waiting for the next one!

I forgot to say...I ship Spottedpaw and Ace...