Update?

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Yes too many plot holes. She just got there yet SOMEHOW know how everyone is treating Naruto even in the middle of night when no civilians are even awake. She know others things as well. I could see it if it was a day or 2 but less than 20 mins and knows a lot of things. You need to really expand of the time she is there so it would be believable that she knows.

Yep trash

More please

and yes before you speak, I know this is a fanfic, but you could warn or warn that your story is based on your views and American laws, rather than really based on Japan and the laws of Naruto's canonical history. I sincerely found Minato's part and this chapter as an excuse for Yasaka not to be with Naruto soon, which I find hilarious, since in DxD it is canon that Youkai has phases of heat and mating seasons, when that happens they go after from a husband (or someone to have sex to lessen the effects of the season) or are stuck in their rooms until the season is over. and from what I saw in the first chapter, Yasaka is of the second type, who is stuck in his rooms until the time is up. the problem is that Yasaka fell in love with Naruto at first sight, so I want to see how you will deal with this fact, since Yasaka found his mate, the only thing that can prevent her is a proper moral law, since where she came from , the laws allow her to take Naruto for herself. and I would like to say that your story is a good story, but I really felt very uncomfortable with this chapter and decided to give my opinion on it, I apologize if this seems like an offensive criticism, I just came to tell the truth about japan and canon of the two Animes. And as I said, this is a fanfiction, so in any case, just ignore this comment and follow the path you want. have a nice day, a good afternoon and a good night.

and yes, this comment below is from another story, but it is also valid for this one, since Naruto is a Japanese anime that takes place in a world that by the time you turn Ninja is already considered a full-fledged adult, I honestly think this moral dilemma that involves irritating Minato, since the Japanese in real life allow people to already have sex at the age of 13.

What moral dilemma, age of consent in Japan is like 13 or 14. So I don't see how he could be a pedo, that just sounds like a bad plotline to make sure he doesn't sleep with all the girls who would want him and to put him in some kind of dumb bind. Are you really gonna force us,your readers, to read this cliche BS? It's not entertaining it's just boring kinda ruins stories not help them, at least pick a different dilemma for him to take up. The man was born and raised Japanese I really don't see how he could be this bothered by this. ( Also in his time the world was one giant dumpster he really should have less morals and shouldn't be bothered by something that in his time would have been legal even if he wasn't in a 15 or 16 year old kids body. The only way I could see him thinking he was a pedo would be if he had a giant hard on for Lolita's, most of the DxD girls look like mature young women so his dilemma is kind of a moot point. )

The story would’ve been better if it was only Yasaka and no one else in my opinion

I hope to see more of this in the future, it was pretty damn good

Dude, this is the exact type of story I was looking for for the past few months, but didn't really notice. A story with Yasaka in Naruto verse. And you did beautifully! Besides a few small grammar issues that are pretty much unnoticeable, this story is off to a Grand Start! And yes those are capitalized. That's because I'm putting extra emphasis on the fact it's not just a good start, or even a great start. it's a Grand Start.

I love this fanfic I hope the next chapter with many years

I still prefer Naruto with Kuroka :p

Sigie

Really good hope you update soon