Reviews for My Military SNAFU
Lactobacillus chapter 3 . 9/29/2019
Kinda sad that there are peoples flame your story.
For me, I enjoyed this very much.
Please continue this great job!
Clipsus chapter 2 . 9/13/2019
I have a soft spot for military/police/generally badass 8man fics. I look forward to the next update.
Guest chapter 3 . 8/18/2019
Love it man... Please continue
TheLaughingStalk chapter 3 . 8/13/2019
Im enjoying the story, I love the character interactions too. Wonderful job
Kharn chapter 3 . 8/13/2019
While I do believe that Hachiman and Zaimokuza would not flinch from Yumiko's glare, I do believe that Yumiko reminds them so much of Yukino. That they flinch whenever she glares at them.
I can see that as the reason for their flinching whenever she glares at them.
cell chapter 3 . 8/13/2019
Why would a military Hikio flinch from a bitch Miura. It seems like you are forcing high-school personalities into a military setting. Same with names being said along with the codes on walkie-talkie. Please think a little more about how the characters should react and rewrite the whole thing if possible.
090909 chapter 3 . 8/12/2019
complete shit... write something new...
NPwall chapter 3 . 8/12/2019
nice chapter
NPwall chapter 2 . 8/9/2019
nice chapter
cell chapter 2 . 8/7/2019
I really hope the romance part is slow and believable and not like most Hikio stories. Also a military 8man will not take her shit like in high school.
Alex Focker chapter 2 . 8/7/2019
Chapter 2 requires a reupload or something on your end to fix the HTML (CSS,XML) coding glitch that fanfiction hasn't fixed yet
Ichigo Oga chapter 2 . 8/7/2019
WHAT THE FUCK IS THIS SHIT? WHY DID YOU POST A FUCKING HTML?!
insert text chapter 2 . 8/7/2019
markup is broken in ch2 btw
HTML Reader chapter 2 . 8/7/2019
Great chapter!
Zegrush chapter 2 . 8/7/2019
somthing wrong with this chapter
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