This was such a great start! I’m honestly already hooked and was so disappointed when there wasn’t more to read. I do hope you continue on with it! I can already tell your character will be one I fall in love with!

BTW: Was your question in the cheap or expensive question list? How much do I win?

I know what she'll learn! (Presses game buzzer) What is...she'll learn that no matter how cute or artsy the title and summary are the authors all love to follow the script line by line never actually having changes be impacting or permanent.

There I figured out the story.

this was good please continue writing