Reviews for Forged in Dragon's Fire
Guest chapter 4 . 8/24
I just stumbled across a crack fanfic for Ruby anyone say overpower dragonborn jaune
BoredKing chapter 4 . 7/24
How about having Jaune and his family go back to Remnant and deal with Salem and you can give us flashbacks as they go?
BorderLand chapter 4 . 7/13
When killing gods becomes a sport you know you come a long way from being the weakest Huntsman in Beacon.
BorderLand chapter 3 . 7/13
So he already killed a genuine dark god, Salem stands no chance then.
Jack Redhawke chapter 3 . 7/3
YA GOD DAMN RIGHT INIGO IS THE BEST!
Jack Redhawke chapter 1 . 7/3
You spelled Pyrrha wrong
kyle77776 chapter 4 . 6/20
Qrow my hero punching Ozpin how about jaune persuades salem to come to skyrim
ShadesofGrey777 chapter 4 . 6/10
Great chapter and I wouldn't mind a story about Jaune and his wife's adventure in Skyrim after this.
Karlos1234ify chapter 4 . 6/8
Outstanding
X3runner chapter 4 . 6/6
I think ozpin would have been hurt worse canonically if he haven’t been using his meat puppet as a shield
jeremiahkelley93 chapter 4 . 6/6
great chapter.
WearyCurmudgeon chapter 4 . 6/6
- Prequel
If you're willing to write it, then I'm willing to read it.

Character X as companion to Character Y tends to lead to all sorts of butterflies compared to canon. Unlike Character X is Character Y, when it's often a close variant of canon.

So the former is a lot more interesting than the latter, least to me anyway.

Having said that, feel free to drop hints, comments and maybe a flashback or two in this story as Chekhov's guns and foreshadowing for the prequel.

It'll stoke anticipation towards getting the whole story, rather than just c*ck teasing references.

- Gear
Hmm..
Would've taken Jaune as more of an Ebony gear user, rather than Dragonbone.

The Sword? No comment on that.. The weapons vary too much between the games, unlike the armour which is fairly consistent.

Speaking of gear.. Could Jaune make gear that stylistically looks like Dwarven/Dwemer craft, but is made say of ebony?

As Dwarven Gear most matches the look that Pyrrha goes for. (But its defensive value sucks compared to the top tier armors. Different material should alter that.)

Just as Nora would rock the Njord or Daedric style (latter might be more appropriate, seeing how she's willing to become the Champion for Mr. Cheese) and Ren the Nightingale maybe Ancient Shrouded?

*shrugs*

- Magic
Yeah, Ren seems like the Restoration school type at the least. Less so Destruction or Illusion (the latter would be more a Blake thing). Not sure about the other schools.

Nora, if she had the skill or patience for it? Destruction all the way. Girl loves her big booms too much to be anything else.

- Sneaky sneaky
Hmm..
Sounds like some of the Daedra might be looking to expand their turf.

*ponders*

Not as if they could mess up Remnant more than it already is really. Remnant meets the classification of Death World courtesy of the Grimm.

Tamriel even with all its hostile critters does not. It's a classic fantasy world really, where things are balanced between the varying sides. Dangerous? Definitely. But people aren't huddling in a few strongholds hoping to survive.

No such balance exists on Remnant where Grimm outnumber the combined forces of Faunus kind and Remnant by AT LEAST 10 to 1, probably more.

*shrugs*

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Corrections:
*... on her as she oved, axes a blur ...*

"moved" rather than "moved".

*... much to the join of the remnants of JNPR.*

"joy" rather than "join".

*... agreed to team me some magic later to see if I can do it."*

"teach" not "team".

*... whatever it is you came her for?"*

"here" not "her".

*You're needed back in Remnant.*

Think it would be "on" rather than "in", due to being on different planets.

*"The Grim Dragons." Pyrrah shuddered ...*

"Grimm"
"Pyrrha"

*They create Grim just by existing, ...*

"Grimm"

*... Jaune managed to keep from looking bellow the entities eyes.*

"entity's" not "entities".
Possessive rather than plural.
Rakkis3059 chapter 4 . 6/6
Oh this is gonna be fun.
MrSunshine744 chapter 4 . 6/6
nice, in looking forward to badass jaune bitch slapping salem and ozpin hahaha
hirshja chapter 4 . 6/6
Blake: But Salem can’t be killed!

Jaune: Been there, done that.
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