Once again I love your writing! You can feel the panic and it sets your heart racing alone with hers. Can feel the sorrow as she loses the man helping her and her fear at trusting people she doesnt know but that she doesnt have a choice. And her pain as shes bitten. I love that you also put this tiny bit of background into the story from the original! Because it gives the readers an idea into Anne and I'm very excited for this rewrite! Love it already! Cant wait for shanks!