Reviews for Hunter of the Red Plains
mikelz0426 chapter 3 . 7/23
Umu, when are you updating this next? I quite enjoyed it actually.
Sultan Asil Arslan chapter 3 . 6/18
When is that next time?
doubledamn chapter 3 . 5/31
Noble Phantasms without History or Legend? That could be problematic... while a majority of Shirou's armoury would be fine if underpowered, any Conceptual Effects would next to useless since they get their power from their Legend more than others. Rho Aias, still a great shield, still really powerful, but its property of 'Ultimate Defence Against Thrown Weapons' would be barely there, since Shirou is only one supplying that Legend with Belief.
MysticRising chapter 3 . 3/5
Oh my! Please continue! Its awesome that we get to see a unique shirou. The amalgamation of ALL emiya's as he us the true heroic spirit freed from alya.
(My personal headcanon; alya is the will of humanity, and at some point women had a higher percentage in the population than men, so alya acts like a woman to reflect this. She wants EMIYA because of his unique seduction skill rank EX (or ero game protagonist skills) capable of affecting even gods like her. And in an act of yandere-ness she punishes shirou because of how his counterparts always fall for rin sakura saber ect. She's totally going to get 'her' man back, even if she has to kill humanity and break his spirit. In alya's mind shirou belongs to her, her to love, her to destroy if anyone tries to take him).
Anyways, seriously good job! Cant wait till we start the more action like fighting beasts or evil knights or the elves (fuck everything after that arc. The devil part really turned me off to BC. I like everything before, how asta WORKS with his teammates to overcome battles, how they forge bonds with each other, gods, the devil bit was bad. Real bad, and worse kinda undermines the elve's role in the story as the tragic antagonists. Sucks)
dragon slayer of death 98 chapter 3 . 2/17
please don't have something bad happen to the mother, it would be really cliche, and emiya deserves happiness
Crhis11 chapter 3 . 1/11
update please
Kitsune Obsessed Freak chapter 3 . 12/5/2019
Dude... Please get a beta. Also, what's your first language? I'm definitely interested in hearing about it if you get the time.
Kitsune Obsessed Freak chapter 3 . 12/5/2019
Tammamo-no-mae and Hakuno Kishinami are two from the nasuverse I would love to see in this story. If you're still looking to add more that is
Kitsune Obsessed Freak chapter 2 . 12/5/2019
A lot of times you use the word don't when you should be using the word not. It's really annoying. Please pay more attention to things like this when you're writing.
nofirekiller123 chapter 3 . 11/18/2019
would love some more
SirDuranix chapter 2 . 11/12/2019
you keep using pacific instead of peaceful, pacific refers to the pacific ocean
JRZTT1246 chapter 3 . 10/28/2019
no more fgo characters. it would be harder to do all character justice and make this story go at slower pace. So no
StarShredder chapter 1 . 10/20/2019
Wow! A decent amount of people dislike this story. I personally enjoy it so I look forward to future updates!
tH1s chapter 3 . 8/30/2019
This is the first black clover fanfiction I tried reading and frankly I am disappointed.
tH1s chapter 2 . 8/30/2019
I don't understand what kind of style you are trying to copy but please stop. Its not working and frankly its really annoying. Take the 2nd chapter as an example, you waste the first couple of paragraphs telling us nothing and repeating things like a broken record.
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