I absolutely love this storyline. It keeps me on my toes lol

I loved this chapter and got so excited when I saw you posted another one! I especially loved that we have more on Musa and Riven's back story. Honestly I think that if you want to stray away from the original content you should do that, cause for me this is better than the original show!

Ooo i cant wait to see you take this story however you want. Original plots are always a soft spot of mine and sadly there arent that many good ones of winx out there. Btw bloom trying to connect with Musa is flippin adorable. Thanks for the update.

I love your story, the characters seem so real. I like how you deal with their royal titles. I also have to admit that I love this new version of Flora

Hi!
I absolutely love your story so far! I also love how we are coming in with a relationship and a connection between Musa and Riven! I really hope that in this retelling Darcy and Riven don't happen or that it a spell or something. It would be really interesting to read a story where Riven isn't lead astray so easily. Can't wait to see how this story progresses! Can't wait to see each of the girls show that they are incredibly skilled and talented (and that it isn't just Bloom who's special) and kick some ass!

I hope you can continue this! I really love your adaptation to the Winx and your own version of the stoy! Hope to read more in the next chapters!

Such a good chapter and interpretation! Can’t wait for the next chapter!

I don’t know why but at the beginning of the chapter when Techna said she’s from a digital realm(?) and they don’t have trees, that line cracked me up for some reason.

Also, this story is developing nicely! I often wonder what made Riven so moody and cold to people because I don’t think we've ever gotten an explanation for it. But I hope he can have a little bit of redemption here somewhere... possibly. Good job with writing this fic. I really like it.

I really like the fighting scenes of this chapter a lot. They were very effective in giving me and picture of how it went down! Good Job!

I am really enjoying your take on the Winx Club. Fingers crossed that there isn't the ridiculous side story of Riven "dating" Darcy, getting spelled by Darcy and becoming a mole since there is this connection between Riven and Musa pretty early on. Hopefully something else happens that kicks his butt into gear so he stops being such a jerk. I look forward to seeing the talents of all the girls and not just Bloom! Thank you again for all your hard work!

I grew up with 4kidz version but I now prefer the RAI version. However RAI’s voice acting is really really bad. Especially in the first season. Also Bloom’s voice was so high pitched. Like I’ve met 12 year olds with deeper voices. Thankfully by season 3 they ironed out a lot of their voice acting issues and changed Bloom’s voice actor to sound like someone who went through puberty

I liked that the specialists appeared againalso realized how I liked that episode, though it was more mystery than action
Yeah most Americans prefer 4kids, but the RAI one seemed more mature for me I think, but I can't think of the dirty jokes lol might have to check that out again

Nice chapter. Also, the rai version's script is way better because it doesn't try to cater to hip lingo, however the voice acting is something else. You also gotta love that proper source material.

Hey! I really liked this chapter, it was very versatile. Also finally some Bloom and Icy action! I'm from Germany btw and in my last years until final graduation

This was great. I really enjoyed the whole shopping spree, a few more quips to add some flavor to the main girls would be good. I can't help but feel the relationships between Bloom and other characters are underdeveloped, but this is something that could develop once they start facing more conflicts. However, this could be a product of how impersonal all these interactions feel. For instance, in the og winx, I remember Icy being VERY cruel and personal with Bloom on their first interaction. This sets her as not only a villain of external but internal conflict. Here, I saw her being kind of cruel, but I didn't feel the sort of power behind it. When Icy traps Bloom in ice you can feel her as a threat (The girl straight up scratches the ice while she monologues and Bloom watches, frozen), I never felt threatened by Icy here.
Ps. I feel kinda bad for telling you to add physical conflict previously because I am realizing now that you probably wanted this story to be dramatic and dialogue based, which was really biased of me because I enjoy action more than drama. You had really great conflict with Bloom's character and I failed to notice that that was adequate conflict and requesting more was just stupid. Sorry for my previous statement on failing to mention that. Anyway, great job, I really enjoyed this.