I'm finding it annoying that everyone can understand Jack, your picking and choosing what times his family cant understand him. Make it consistent. You dont write like his family is assuming what he's saying and responding, it reads like they perfectly understand what he's saying all the time.

Ah finaly, the next chapter i've been checking up every day this week for it.
This chapter was let's just call it intresting
It does a good job at telling how the other transformed people react to their normal days.
But there wasn't enough Jack in this one, y'know the main protagonist?
It also features loads of characters that i don't recognize, maybe i missed something.

Now onto gramatical issues.
First of mainly in the first part before the chapter, there are a lot of capital letters where they shouldn't be
common things i've seen are the word after the first word being capitalized, like:
I Am, it should be "I am"
And whit nouns, it's not German you know.
I'm sad to say that i've seen way too many instances of you're being written as your.
I think you already know but
"Your" is for if someone own something "my cup, your cup", and "you're" is for when someone is something or simply put short for "you are": "i am it, you're it (you are it)", i feel like i realy shouldn't have to say this but alas.

This was all ment to be constructive, i don't wanna be mean, just don't feel attacked ok :), hope you do something whit this, otherwise all my text goes to waste :(

Anayways happy anniversary!

Awesome chapter, great work!

Hello again, I've read chapter two of your story. Found it interesting to read how Jack's mother reacted to finding that her son, whom she first thought of being a stranger was transformed. Glad that they're able to still partly understand each other through writing which Jack barely able to do which I'm sure is very tricky. Finding out that Jack isn't the only family member that had transformed gives a possible opportunity of meeting another newly turned pokemon like Jack in the coming future as it looks like the family is gathering together out in the woods as seen at the end. Haven't read any more news events on this chapter but from what Jack's mom had explained to her son about what happened at school, things quickly went to complete chaos as people panicked all over the place. I certainly would've done the same if someone near me or myself would've changed.

As for any writing errors I've found on here, I've found three so far. If there's any more, I'll PM you on discord about them if you want so don't worry about me typing up every single error I find on here in the reviews.

Here are the first, second, and third errors I've found. Here's the first one.

I Just don't know anymore.

The J in just shouldn't be capitalized as I at the beginning of the sentence is already capitalized. Now onto the second.

"When night falls, the rings on its body begin to glow, and they recharge their energy using the moon's aura."

I think this should be in bold just like the other parts of the pokedex entries above it, think it was missed. Now onto the third and last one.

Starting the car, Mom turned to face me. "This will take longer than usual due to how crowded

Looks like a part of a sentence is missing in the end, could be wrong. Maybe you could check this and see if you got to finish it or not. So far the first two chapters look great so, hopefully, I'll be able to review the next chapter sooner. Great work you have done here.

0_0 I ned more to gud too stup reading (the bad grammar is intentional)

Hello Jackboy0815, my name is Uspeon on here. I read the first chapter of your story here and found it to be quite interesting enough that I had to send you a review for it. The beginning with Jack waking up, finding that he has a different body plus him moving around the house seemed somewhat reasonable and believable to me. His reactions would fit someone who's shocked at their transformation before beginning the long process of figuring out how they'll be dealing with the current situation they're in. I would presume some would panic while others would be shell-shocked to do anything else other than trying to process had just happened to them.

It was interesting to read a glimpse of what is happening around the world through the news posts that Jack was reading. From the looks of things, the world or at least large portions of it are already in chaos. Can barely imagine the number of car wrecks, plane crashes, traffic jams, property damage and accidental injures could be caused by those who have just transformed. The story has already caught my desire to read more often on fanfiction again so hopefully, I'll be able to review each one of your chapters later on. Already joined the server on discord a while ago but haven't talked with anyone yet, only observe. So whenever you'll like to talk to me or not, I'll be looking forward to it.

I've reread the first chapter a couple of times to see if there was any wording or grammar that was out of place but found only one so far, the rest looks like it's done correctly. I don't claim to be an expert in spelling grammar but I'm pretty observant enough to at least try to help out as best as I can. This is the only error I noticed.

'Luckily, I was no able to easily reach the doorknob.'

I think the word 'no' should've been 'now' if I'm correct. Not a big issue as it's only a slight spelling error.

Ah finaly,
Last chapter felt very out of place and nonsenceical, like it was some kind of joke.
It's good to see that the incorrect capitalization has been fixed.
But there are still a few spelling mistakes here and there, but the problem I see most often, is when someone understands Jack when they are clearly not supposed to.
I don't feel like this chapter had any major plot points, I find that a let down, but who cares.
Alas, let's hope the next chapteris quicker :)

~that one random person at 1 am

I am very happy.

Okay... is it just me or is jack starting to sound like magneto?

happy monthsary! it's been one whole month since you uploaded new chapters!

Let me just say, this story is great. One, I haven’t seen anything else like this. Two, the story has a amazing plot. I don’t know why other people aren’t doing this.

Loved the story! I am excited to see all of the adventures that percentverse will have. Also the last chapter, chapter 15, makes me think he saw the future or something. Super interesting! Keep up the good work and glad to have found an amazing story. Would definitely recommend 10/10

you had this ( MFWT7tz) on ur profile
which isn't a link it has one extra / and no .com .net .us anything behind it what ware you tryning whit this XD

why no this is bad please stop

to be honest didn't enyoy this chapter. it doesn't continue well on the other chapter, and is very odd.
nothing makes sense and it is hard to follow.
i hope the direction can shift to be a bit calmer, and the rather strange events of this chapter can be explored more.
it was hard to know who whas who and what and where and if its real or fake and when.
i have still noticed capital letters where they shouldný like
rabbit, day, night, confused and many others

good luck