| Reviews for The Last Mile |
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JeaneneP chapter 1 . 9/10 Awesome story! Well done! |
matt626 chapter 7 . 3/22 This was cool |
BelunaTH chapter 1 . 11/26/2019 Omg! Omg! Omg! hard to reed but so so so good! Awesome writeing, couldent stop reading and was trembling during the whole story! Thank You so much! |
Guest chapter 7 . 11/24/2019 I have tears in my eyes. That was a beautiful ending to an incredible story. Great job. I can’t wait to read more of your work |
archangel69 chapter 7 . 11/7/2019 Absolutely amazing story. Although I would have liked to read the reactions of everyone in the team during Clay's recovery. My only problem is that I don't like Stella I wish it was a new girlfriend. |
KyGrace chapter 7 . 9/5/2019 The only word that I have is: Bravo! Great story with all of the action, personalities & emotional depth that a reader could ever ask for. The simple gift of the piece of rope... just perfect. Thank you so very much for sharing your talent! More SEAL Team stories, please. |
writeallnight chapter 7 . 9/2/2019 I was going to say punching Ash Spenser in the face seems like it was probably very therapeutic for Sonny, but honestly, I think it was therapeutic for all of us lol! What an epic story. I love how you didn't have Clay instantly recover, but instead let him flounder and struggle his way back to "normal." What he went through was brutal and it deserved to be handled well afterward. The ending with the rope. Whoa. Such a sucker for romance and dang. That is one of the most romantic proposals ever. What a brilliant idea to have him weave the rope into something else and give it a new purpose and meaning in his life. Amazing! |
writeallnight chapter 5 . 9/1/2019 HOLY. SHIT. I missed this chapter! How did that happen?! DAMN IT. You really went for it with this one. Clay always being the one who eggs Sonny on when the rest of the team is over it is so accurate. Jason's turmoil in this really had my gut churning. And the end. HOLY FREAKING COW THE END. Ray. My gosh. I didn't see that coming at all. That shot. Damn. Wow. Yeah that's going to be some conversation. I feel the need to re-read this immediately because I feel like I missed some of your amazing details the first time I was reading so fast! Brilliant work! |
Guest chapter 7 . 8/28/2019 I loved your story! I’m a minority but I love Clay and Stella and I heard her show isn’t happening so I hope she’s going to be on season 3 |
burnmedown chapter 7 . 8/27/2019 As always, absolutely perfect. You captured Clay's personality and POV so incredibly well, and this chapter in particular was a gut-wrenching, believable portrayal of the aftermath of severe trauma. I loved everything about it, but my favorite was probably Clay's interaction with Ray. Their relationship fascinates me, so I'm always thrilled to see it explored more in fic or on screen, and this was just amazing: Ray's struggle over the awful decision he had to make; Clay understanding it and being grateful that his teammate was willing to make the impossible, selfless choice to try to grant him peace, even though Ray himself would then have to live with it for the rest of his life. I don't know how you come up with these absolutely gorgeous concepts and then execute every one of them perfectly, but I am very glad you do. Fingers crossed that you write more in this fandom soon. Thank you! |
Shellymae88 chapter 7 . 8/27/2019 LOVED every bit of this story...you are a very talented writer and can't see what you have coming at us next (hint hint)! Just an amazing job! |
missblueeyes63 chapter 7 . 8/27/2019 Absolutely loved this story. The path to his recovery held me spellbound. I loved every minute of it ... I laughed, I teared up, and ultimately I grinned like a Cheshire cat. Thanks for sharing your talent. |
kayleesj chapter 7 . 8/27/2019 I.. wow! Amazing, just amazing! I‘m not really one to cry while reading but this final chapter had me on the verge of tears a couple of times, for multiple reasons. Big shoutout to you for including Mandy, Stella and Naima and also for not making therapy look like a joke. I sometimes get a bit tired of how psychological help is treated as something for weak people, you did the exact opposite. Thank you for this :) Thank you so much for writing this! I know we all sort of bombarded you with reviews about how great this story was and how great your writing is. However I sincerely hope that it didn‘t pressure you into anything. That being said I hope you find new inspiration and energy and are keen on writing more! |
mendenbar chapter 7 . 8/27/2019 A fantastic story, full of angst, pathos and a truly amazing and fitting ending. |
Camille chapter 7 . 8/27/2019 Love it! Absolutely amazing story |