It looks very promising so far and youve done well for the first chapter as most first time fanfiction writers tend to jump straight into the story and pairings and tend to make their oc too op, and sometimes do not create a backstory that makes sense or is constantly changing, but all in all I can find myself looking forward to the update of this story, also since english isn't your natural tounge try to read English fanfiction and always look up what a words meaning is if your not sure because it better to be safe then sorry.

Sorry for rambling, anyway great chapter, keep it up!

Hey there! This happens to a lot of people, so please listen. The chapter came through the wrong way, so you have to republish it for anyone to understand it. P.S, you’re english is good enough in my book, and so is your grammar. Keep it up!