Wonderful

Cool. Good chapter of course

How cute! I enjoyed their little fight skate thing. May their anger fuel their skating! Haha. And Ebine totally seems like the kind who would break out the embarrassing stories and baby book the moment anyone came near her. Lol

Great job! Keep it up!

Nice chapter of course. Hooray

Cute! You taunt my shipper heart, Fakiru is my ultimate OTP. Lol but this was really cute! I love that Lilie makes things hard for (star) drama (star). I can't wait for them to start showing marked improvement. Oh man, I'm so excited for them. And Ebine trying to sneak poor Ahiru a treat. Honestly, me.

Keep it up! Real good work.

Nice three chapters

This was cute! It was nice having some time with Femio. He's always so confident, so it is nice to see you try to peel those layers back.

There was a repeat phrase at the end of the first position blurb, FYI. We all miss something editing, and it was the only thing that last it at me, so good job!

I like the little character blurbs you're adding! Real cute! Reminds me a bit of the old days on ff. xD

Keep it up! You're doing amazing!

Good job! I think you really nailed the hardass coach archetype for Fakir.

And oof! Femio and Ahiru are going hard at each other. I wonder what they did to get their hackles all raised. Though it does seem a little ooc for Femio to be so cruel to a /lady/. (Oh, goodness, I'm imagining him as Johnny Bravo now lol) Perhaps if he were to harp more on her inability to be a "true maiden"? Just a thought. I thought when he criticized her for her crassness, it really hot the mark. Honestly, though, with how little we see of him, good on you for putting flair to his character.

Femio interpretive ice dancing is a hilarious thought, but also, considering there's a cult following for interpretive dancing, I bet he has a word ecclectic group of fans. Lol

Keep it up!

This is nice

Throwing a review on ff, too, because I can. Ahahaha!

This is cute! You're clearly having a lot of fun with the idea since you're putting out chapters so quickly! May that enthusiasm stay with you!

Keep it up! I look forward to seeing how this all plays out. What could Femio possibly do to win over Ahiru's heart?

Good. Maybe great