I really enjoyed your story and I agree that there are not many MJ / Peter stories! I really hope you write one cause this story was great!
The only person who could rival Tony as a helicopter parent would be Nick Fury. Put what if Nick was a Panda or lighthouse parent the total opposite of Tony. Unbeknownst to Tony MJ will be Nick’s youngest daughter Nat, Clint, and Monica are his other children) I could see a young Fury falling for Maria and the two raising Nat , Clint , and Monica off the grid. Don't know if the ages of all the characters would work. I think it would be ROFL funny if Clint’s kids keep asking their dad for lollypops and when lollypops were coming for a visit. ( can you imagine Tony’s comments) and then Maria ( Lolly ) and Fury ( Pops) show up at the farm with Peter and MJ.
With that thought in mind I thought of a story that contained an orphanage for the deceased kids of super spies,...Tony adopt Peter and Fury adopts MJ as tweens.
MJ/Peter, Tony/ Pepper, Fury/ Maria pairings.
Thanks for writing a great story!

Well I thought it was spot on! You wrote Mj perfectly! lol im just going through and reviewing all your stories. It's kind of surprising how few people leave a review! I mean someone is taking the time to write and share something with you, the least you can do is review it! So I always make sure to review the stories I read here. Yours are def some of my fav

awww

I will admit, just the general layout of the page at first was a bit jarring for me, and took me some time to get past and actually soak up the content, but once I did i really loved it! I really feel you captured the characters, especially MJ, really well, and i hope you do more with them! Good work!

Now Tony will have fun teasing him if Peter doesn't ask for help from him, May, Happy or Pepper...

Love is weird...

I love this, I love Spideychelle (FFH was also awesome btw). Also, for writing apps, I can understand not having Office 360, I'm also unemployed. Google Docs is pretty good for most things, and Open Office has always been good for meKeep up the good work, and I cant wait to see chapter 2