Reviews for Kintsugi
Guest chapter 13 . 9/24/2019
Love this chapter Jennifer Baratta
CF2 chapter 13 . 9/24/2019
Writing her thoughts

and feelings in the

notebook is going

to be hard for

Lena.

But much

healthier than

putting her feelings

in boxes.

It's good that

this is helping though.

LOL to lier mclierface.

I'm glad she misses Kara

though.

So telling Alex

she has her mother.

Probably the right

time now to tell

her since Kara knows

and would probably

eventually tell Alex.

That's so cute that

Kara dropped everything

just to fly back to

show Alex that

Lena texted her.

It shows how happy

Kara is that things

are getting a little

better between her

and Lena.

So Kara did

tell Alex about Lillian.

I'm glad Alex listened

to Kara and Kelly.

She realized

Lena coming to her

was about her trust

issues.

But at the same

time not playing

with kid gloves either.

I'm glad Lena

realizes this is

just Alex being

herself.

Alex understands

that Lillian is still

Lena's mother.

Love Alex's words

to Lena.

Yes,it seems the notbook

is helping.

LOL at Donna's interest

in Sam.

Well that's one way

to deal with the Daily

Planet

I miss Sam and

Ruby as well.

Texting is a

nice baby step.

LOL to the Harry Potter

thing.

I thought it

was a nod to The Cheetah

too.

GarBeast Boy from

The Titans.

Jumpa is a nice nod

to the

Woman's pet Kangaroo.

I'm glad Lena talked

to Donna about using

her to hurt Kara.

Kory Starfire

I also glad Donna

revealed why she

let Lena use her

like that.

Really great scene

between Donna and

Lena.

Really like what

Kelly tells Lena

at the end of the chapter.

Such a great chapter.
Guest chapter 12 . 9/17/2019
Awesome chapter Jennifer Baratta
CF2 chapter 12 . 9/17/2019
Lena definitely

feels guilty over

how she handled

Kara's secret.

Great to see

Sam.

Love Sam's concerns.

And her words to Lena.

Is it wrong,that I want

Sam to come to

National City?

So Lena is going to

therapy and Kelly

is her therapist?

Lol to making the

coffee Irish.

Like that Kara

is so interested in

Donna.

Intersting,you're bringing

in the new William Dey character.

oooh,Dey just said the wrong

thing.

Way to go ,Donna.

Nice connect to Arrow

with the Diggle/Lila

adoption.

Yes,it does seem that Oliver

won't survive Crisis.

Nice Batwoman nod

and

the developing friendship

between Kara and Kate.

Love seeing some of that

here.

Good description from

Kate about how she

saw the Kara/Lena

relationship.

Love how Kara describes

Lena.

Kate is a great sounding

board for Kara.

Agree with Kate,

Krypton is lightyears

ahead of earth in some ways.

It's so Kara in the way

she sees people.

Kate definitely

calls things regarding

Lena.

Kate gives Kara some

good advice.

Yep,Kate calls it,

Kara is in love with

Lena.

Hmm,Maggie,Alex's Maggie?

In the comics,it is Alex's

Maggie.

Another great chapter.

Loved the Kara and Kate

talk.
CF2 chapter 11 . 9/17/2019
I got behind on

this story so

I'm going to try to double

up today.

Interesting how you

deal with the aftermath

of Crisis.I assume on the

shows like in the comics

(until the multiverse

returned in 2005),

there will be only one earth.

I'm curious if people will

remember things or deal

with it in the way you did.

Understandable that

the events of the

Crisis impacted Lena

so hard.

I love how all Lena

had to say was Kara's

name and Kara came.

to Lena.

So happy that they

are finally going to talk.

And I like the idea

Lena wants to talk

to Kara,not Supergirl.

It's sweet Lena

kept Kara's clothes.

I also like that Kara

isn't wearing her

glasses here.

It

symbolize no more

secrets to me.

It's so endearing

seeing Kara so

vulnerable with

Lena here.

LOL to the first

thing Lena says

to Kara.

And Kara's reaction.

Lena brings up a good

point though.

But I understsnd

Kara's response

about why she

was so angry about

the kryptonite and

Harun-El.

She

was deeply hurt.

And I always understood

at that time why

Kara didn't tell Lena

the truth then.

It was clear in the

elevator scene

in season 3.

Glad Kara admitted

that some of those

fears were planted

there by Lillian.

I like that Kara

is also admitting

the stress of what's

expected of Supergirl

played a part too.

LOL to Kara bringing

her own alcohol.

I'm glad Lena

revealed to

Kara about where

Lillian if

Kara is a little ticked

about it.

Again no

more secrets.

I bet Alex won't be

happy either.

And good on

Lena for admitting

part of the reason

she hid this is because

she was pissed at everybody.

Again,I understand why

Kara is angry about

this but atleast

it's out in the open

now.

Lena brings up

some great point

on why she handled

Lillian in this way.

It's good that

Kara understands

somewhat why

now.

Lena revealing

Lillian's words under

the baby truth seeker

to Kara I think

is pretty big.

I love Kara's words,

a callback from the show,

to Lena here.

Another big thing,

revealing to Kara what

she was doing in the

VR.

Kara's reaction

to the Alex thing is

I love

Kara's response to

the other things Lena

did to the VR version

of her.

Glad the Donna

thing is brought up.

And Lena killing

Lex.

Kare revealing

she killed her

uncle is another

big moment.

Kara's words to

Lena about

Non and Les

are so powerful.

Love Alex's reaction

to Lena killing Lex

is also brought up.

LOL to the whole Stranger

Things bit.

Love that Lena invites

Kara back into

her life.

The was a amazing

I could want in a

deep talk between

Lena and Kara.
Guest chapter 11 . 9/7/2019
Best chapter yet. Jennifer Baratta
CF2 chapter 10 . 9/1/2019
Love seeing Kara pissed

at the villains making a

power play while the

multiverse is dying.

Gotham means

Batwoman I bet.

Yep.

Yeah,I bet it's tough

for Kara to see

another version

of Livewire.

Especailly since

her Livewire reformed

and sacrificed herself.

LOL,love that you got

Kate's personality

from Elseworlds

down.

Yeah,I can buy

Bawoman making a

comment like that

about Kara's new suit

vs. her old

The Kevin Conroy Bruce

Wayne I assume.

Taking a shot at Lena

wll definitely not

get this Bruce

Wayne on Kara's

good side.

Love Kara defending Lena.

LOL that this makes

Kate even more interested

in Kara.

The Brandon Routh

Kingdom Come Superman.

Kara comforting the Earth

22 Superman is such

a heartfelt moment.

Love everybody

comforting eachother.

That is a nice moment

of Alex making that

kryptonian prayer.

As is Lena making

her own prayer.

Very dark

note to end the chapter

on.

Great job.
Guest chapter 10 . 8/31/2019
Can't wait for next chapter and Outstanding chapter! Jennifer Baratta
CF2 chapter 9 . 8/26/2019
Lena remembering every moment

with Kara is so sad.

And the mention

and memory of

Kara's smiles

and laughs.

It's so bringing

the emotion.

The Harry Potter

bit is so cute.

I think I know

what Lena's plan

is.

And it's a good thing

Superman showed

up because he might

be able to do what

I think Lena is going

to try to do.

Yep,the sun

I get Lena's anger

at Superman.

She needs to let

him do this though.

Glad Alura arrived

too.

YAY! Kara lives!

I could see something

like this used on the

show although I think

it's Superman who

will die in Supergirl's

place.

Alex is right,Kara

and Lena just need

each other right now.

They can deal with

their issues later.

Love Kara's and Lena's

reunion.

And Lena holding

Kara's hand touches

the heart.

Yes,they all have

to still work through

there issues but this

was a huge step.

Ofcourse Lena

was making the power suit

for Alex.

Plesee let the baby

boy be named Jon.

YAY!it is Jon.

Love the moment

between Superman

and Lena and Clark

thanking Lena.

Aww,letting Lena

hold Jon.

Love the,"honored friend

of the House Of El"

title.

Love Kara's reaction to

her cousin calling

Lena a friend to their

family.

Another Aww

to Kara meeting

her second cousin

One of the things I love

in the comics is the

relationship between

Kara and Jon both

when Jon was 10

and now currently

aged up to 17(the

same age Supergirl

is in the comics)

due to being trapped

on Earth 3 for 7 years

but only a few weeks

passing in the prime

Earth.

Love Kara holding

Jon.

Great interaction between

Lena and Winn.

LOL to the Death Star

quip from Lena.

Yes,ever since Lyla

was introduced

on Arrow,they've

had a setup for Crisis.

Uh oh but The Monitor

did take Lex in the

season 4 finale and

it's confirmed Lex

will be involved

in season 5/Crisis.

Love how Alex & Kara

draw closs to Lena.

And Lex is already

trying to continue

what he started

by driving Lena

from her friends.

And ofcourse

Lex reveals to everyone

that Lena shot him

dead.

LOL to Alex's offer.

Love The Monitor's

threat to Lex.

Yeesss! The Legends

I assume.

Amazing chapter
CF2 chapter 8 . 8/25/2019
Doubling up.

Will read chapter 9 later

today or tomorrow.

Lena seems completely

overwhelmed.

I'm glad Lena is

feeling remorse

for how she handled

things with Kara.

I'm also glad

Lena is starting

to understand

why Kara may

of wanted a friend

who didn't know

she was Supergirl.

Lena still has

a right to be hurt

and angry but it's

a good sign that

she is alteast starting

to see Kara's side now too.

I'm glad you brought

up the situation with

the kryptonite in

season 3 and the

Harun-El in season 4.

That has a little

different spin in

Lena's eyes now.

Also glad Lena finally

realizes why Lex

exposed Kara's secret

to her.

It was a last

ditch spite move

against both her

and Supergirl.

LOL to Alex not being

swayed by Lena's corporate

face after resisting things

like Kara's puppy dog eyes.

Yeah,Kara is not going

to like Lena in the middle

of the action and danger.

Happy that even if

she is jealous in regards

to Lena,Kara loves fighting

beside Donna.

Yep,Kara is not happy

Lena is in the middle

of this.

LOL to Winn's Iron

Man line.

Uh Oh,looks like we

are getting the Crisis

moment from the

comics where Supergirl

sacrificed herself.

*Sob*

And I knew this would

be the thing that pushes

Lena over the edge

to forgive Kara.

The last part of

this chapter is so emotionally

draining and heartwrenching.

One hell of a moment

to end that

unlike in the Crisis

comic,Supergirl isn't

really gone.

Great job on this one.
ShadowCub chapter 1 . 8/24/2019
So this bunch of liars are going to ignore Lena's wishes so she ends up doing what they want her to do? Sounds like the last two seasons.
Guest chapter 9 . 8/24/2019
Awesome chapter Jennifer Baratta.
Guest chapter 8 . 8/20/2019
Can't wait for next chapter and Jawdropping chapter. Jennifer Baratta
CF2 chapter 7 . 8/18/2019
Finally getting

to the latest chapter.

Yes,I can see how some

of Lena's anger is on the

fact she couldn't

see what was right

in front of her.

A big moment here

with Lena admitting

to herself that she

does love Kara in

some manner.

Lena being Kara's

safe place is a

good take.

Donna arrived at the perfect

time.

To stop Lena

from drinking herself

into a stuper or using

the VR again.

So Donna knows

what Lena is doing

with her and is okay

with it.

I really love Donna's

explanation for why

she is okay with

Lena clinging to

her this way and

how she is not okay

with Lena hurting

herself via the VR

or drinking.

I so love Donna

getting angry when

she finds out what

Lena is doing with the

VR while also revealing

she knows Kara is Supergirl

and lol how she knows.

Great moment.

I love how jealous Kara

is of Donna in regards

to Lena.

Love Lena also

defending Kara.

Donna is right.

Lena can't let

Lex win.

If Oliver is here,that

must mean you are doing

Crisis.

Nice callback to this

past seasons Thanksgiving

episode with Spike.

I like the idea of

Supergirl developing

a little friendship with

Spike's owner,the little girl.

It's sweet.

Nice nod to the fact that

Tom Cavanagh is playing

Pariah.

I also like that

Lena misses her

friendship with

Alex and their love

of science.

Glad Lena is being

brought into the Crisis

threat.

Love how protective

Kara is of Lena here.

So Earth 38 had a

Oliver and Tommy

and Lena knew them.

There was no question

Lena would help.

Nice bringing Leo in.

Hope he returns on

shows for this too.

Lena's past with

Earth 38 Oliver and

Tommy is pretty

dark.

Lex IS a bastard.

Glad Ray is okay

even if Earth X is gone.

LOL at Kara's summery

of previous multiverse

adventures.

Yay to Donna resuming

the Wonder Girl mantle

again and joining the

fight.

Great moment of

J'onn introducing

her as Wonder Girl

and their warm reunion.

Love the warriors

handshake.

Yay to the return

of Winn.I think on

the show,he'll

be returning after

Crisis I believe.

But nice having

him back earlier

here.

LMAO here at

Leo asking if

Earth 38 is the

gay earth.

I love that Kara is

finally going to

tell Lena how

she feels but

Oh No.

The

arrival of the shadow

demons has me really

worried.

In the comics,this led

to the death of Supergirl.

I think Supergirl is pretty

safe on the shows(I think

one of the Supermen

are going to die instead)

but I'm really worried

here.

That it will take

Supergirl dying or

being seriously

injured for Lena

to realize how much

she loves Kara.

Amazing job on this

chapter.
Guest chapter 7 . 8/16/2019
Awesome chapter and can't wait for next chapter. Jennifer Baratta
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