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Guest chapter 13 . 9/24/2019 Love this chapter Jennifer Baratta |
CF2 chapter 13 . 9/24/2019 Writing her thoughts and feelings in the notebook is going to be hard for Lena. But much healthier than putting her feelings in boxes. It's good that this is helping though. LOL to lier mclierface. I'm glad she misses Kara though. So telling Alex she has her mother. Probably the right time now to tell her since Kara knows and would probably eventually tell Alex. That's so cute that Kara dropped everything just to fly back to show Alex that Lena texted her. It shows how happy Kara is that things are getting a little better between her and Lena. So Kara did tell Alex about Lillian. I'm glad Alex listened to Kara and Kelly. She realized Lena coming to her was about her trust issues. But at the same time not playing with kid gloves either. I'm glad Lena realizes this is just Alex being herself. Alex understands that Lillian is still Lena's mother. Love Alex's words to Lena. Yes,it seems the notbook is helping. LOL at Donna's interest in Sam. Well that's one way to deal with the Daily Planet I miss Sam and Ruby as well. Texting is a nice baby step. LOL to the Harry Potter thing. I thought it was a nod to The Cheetah too. GarBeast Boy from The Titans. Jumpa is a nice nod to the Woman's pet Kangaroo. I'm glad Lena talked to Donna about using her to hurt Kara. Kory Starfire I also glad Donna revealed why she let Lena use her like that. Really great scene between Donna and Lena. Really like what Kelly tells Lena at the end of the chapter. Such a great chapter. |
Guest chapter 12 . 9/17/2019 Awesome chapter Jennifer Baratta |
CF2 chapter 12 . 9/17/2019 Lena definitely feels guilty over how she handled Kara's secret. Great to see Sam. Love Sam's concerns. And her words to Lena. Is it wrong,that I want Sam to come to National City? So Lena is going to therapy and Kelly is her therapist? Lol to making the coffee Irish. Like that Kara is so interested in Donna. Intersting,you're bringing in the new William Dey character. oooh,Dey just said the wrong thing. Way to go ,Donna. Nice connect to Arrow with the Diggle/Lila adoption. Yes,it does seem that Oliver won't survive Crisis. Nice Batwoman nod and the developing friendship between Kara and Kate. Love seeing some of that here. Good description from Kate about how she saw the Kara/Lena relationship. Love how Kara describes Lena. Kate is a great sounding board for Kara. Agree with Kate, Krypton is lightyears ahead of earth in some ways. It's so Kara in the way she sees people. Kate definitely calls things regarding Lena. Kate gives Kara some good advice. Yep,Kate calls it, Kara is in love with Lena. Hmm,Maggie,Alex's Maggie? In the comics,it is Alex's Maggie. Another great chapter. Loved the Kara and Kate talk. |
CF2 chapter 11 . 9/17/2019 I got behind on this story so I'm going to try to double up today. Interesting how you deal with the aftermath of Crisis.I assume on the shows like in the comics (until the multiverse returned in 2005), there will be only one earth. I'm curious if people will remember things or deal with it in the way you did. Understandable that the events of the Crisis impacted Lena so hard. I love how all Lena had to say was Kara's name and Kara came. to Lena. So happy that they are finally going to talk. And I like the idea Lena wants to talk to Kara,not Supergirl. It's sweet Lena kept Kara's clothes. I also like that Kara isn't wearing her glasses here. It symbolize no more secrets to me. It's so endearing seeing Kara so vulnerable with Lena here. LOL to the first thing Lena says to Kara. And Kara's reaction. Lena brings up a good point though. But I understsnd Kara's response about why she was so angry about the kryptonite and Harun-El. She was deeply hurt. And I always understood at that time why Kara didn't tell Lena the truth then. It was clear in the elevator scene in season 3. Glad Kara admitted that some of those fears were planted there by Lillian. I like that Kara is also admitting the stress of what's expected of Supergirl played a part too. LOL to Kara bringing her own alcohol. I'm glad Lena revealed to Kara about where Lillian if Kara is a little ticked about it. Again no more secrets. I bet Alex won't be happy either. And good on Lena for admitting part of the reason she hid this is because she was pissed at everybody. Again,I understand why Kara is angry about this but atleast it's out in the open now. Lena brings up some great point on why she handled Lillian in this way. It's good that Kara understands somewhat why now. Lena revealing Lillian's words under the baby truth seeker to Kara I think is pretty big. I love Kara's words, a callback from the show, to Lena here. Another big thing, revealing to Kara what she was doing in the VR. Kara's reaction to the Alex thing is I love Kara's response to the other things Lena did to the VR version of her. Glad the Donna thing is brought up. And Lena killing Lex. Kare revealing she killed her uncle is another big moment. Kara's words to Lena about Non and Les are so powerful. Love Alex's reaction to Lena killing Lex is also brought up. LOL to the whole Stranger Things bit. Love that Lena invites Kara back into her life. The was a amazing I could want in a deep talk between Lena and Kara. |
Guest chapter 11 . 9/7/2019 Best chapter yet. Jennifer Baratta |
CF2 chapter 10 . 9/1/2019 Love seeing Kara pissed at the villains making a power play while the multiverse is dying. Gotham means Batwoman I bet. Yep. Yeah,I bet it's tough for Kara to see another version of Livewire. Especailly since her Livewire reformed and sacrificed herself. LOL,love that you got Kate's personality from Elseworlds down. Yeah,I can buy Bawoman making a comment like that about Kara's new suit vs. her old The Kevin Conroy Bruce Wayne I assume. Taking a shot at Lena wll definitely not get this Bruce Wayne on Kara's good side. Love Kara defending Lena. LOL that this makes Kate even more interested in Kara. The Brandon Routh Kingdom Come Superman. Kara comforting the Earth 22 Superman is such a heartfelt moment. Love everybody comforting eachother. That is a nice moment of Alex making that kryptonian prayer. As is Lena making her own prayer. Very dark note to end the chapter on. Great job. |
Guest chapter 10 . 8/31/2019 Can't wait for next chapter and Outstanding chapter! Jennifer Baratta |
CF2 chapter 9 . 8/26/2019 Lena remembering every moment with Kara is so sad. And the mention and memory of Kara's smiles and laughs. It's so bringing the emotion. The Harry Potter bit is so cute. I think I know what Lena's plan is. And it's a good thing Superman showed up because he might be able to do what I think Lena is going to try to do. Yep,the sun I get Lena's anger at Superman. She needs to let him do this though. Glad Alura arrived too. YAY! Kara lives! I could see something like this used on the show although I think it's Superman who will die in Supergirl's place. Alex is right,Kara and Lena just need each other right now. They can deal with their issues later. Love Kara's and Lena's reunion. And Lena holding Kara's hand touches the heart. Yes,they all have to still work through there issues but this was a huge step. Ofcourse Lena was making the power suit for Alex. Plesee let the baby boy be named Jon. YAY!it is Jon. Love the moment between Superman and Lena and Clark thanking Lena. Aww,letting Lena hold Jon. Love the,"honored friend of the House Of El" title. Love Kara's reaction to her cousin calling Lena a friend to their family. Another Aww to Kara meeting her second cousin One of the things I love in the comics is the relationship between Kara and Jon both when Jon was 10 and now currently aged up to 17(the same age Supergirl is in the comics) due to being trapped on Earth 3 for 7 years but only a few weeks passing in the prime Earth. Love Kara holding Jon. Great interaction between Lena and Winn. LOL to the Death Star quip from Lena. Yes,ever since Lyla was introduced on Arrow,they've had a setup for Crisis. Uh oh but The Monitor did take Lex in the season 4 finale and it's confirmed Lex will be involved in season 5/Crisis. Love how Alex & Kara draw closs to Lena. And Lex is already trying to continue what he started by driving Lena from her friends. And ofcourse Lex reveals to everyone that Lena shot him dead. LOL to Alex's offer. Love The Monitor's threat to Lex. Yeesss! The Legends I assume. Amazing chapter |
CF2 chapter 8 . 8/25/2019 Doubling up. Will read chapter 9 later today or tomorrow. Lena seems completely overwhelmed. I'm glad Lena is feeling remorse for how she handled things with Kara. I'm also glad Lena is starting to understand why Kara may of wanted a friend who didn't know she was Supergirl. Lena still has a right to be hurt and angry but it's a good sign that she is alteast starting to see Kara's side now too. I'm glad you brought up the situation with the kryptonite in season 3 and the Harun-El in season 4. That has a little different spin in Lena's eyes now. Also glad Lena finally realizes why Lex exposed Kara's secret to her. It was a last ditch spite move against both her and Supergirl. LOL to Alex not being swayed by Lena's corporate face after resisting things like Kara's puppy dog eyes. Yeah,Kara is not going to like Lena in the middle of the action and danger. Happy that even if she is jealous in regards to Lena,Kara loves fighting beside Donna. Yep,Kara is not happy Lena is in the middle of this. LOL to Winn's Iron Man line. Uh Oh,looks like we are getting the Crisis moment from the comics where Supergirl sacrificed herself. *Sob* And I knew this would be the thing that pushes Lena over the edge to forgive Kara. The last part of this chapter is so emotionally draining and heartwrenching. One hell of a moment to end that unlike in the Crisis comic,Supergirl isn't really gone. Great job on this one. |
ShadowCub chapter 1 . 8/24/2019 So this bunch of liars are going to ignore Lena's wishes so she ends up doing what they want her to do? Sounds like the last two seasons. |
Guest chapter 9 . 8/24/2019 Awesome chapter Jennifer Baratta. |
Guest chapter 8 . 8/20/2019 Can't wait for next chapter and Jawdropping chapter. Jennifer Baratta |
CF2 chapter 7 . 8/18/2019 Finally getting to the latest chapter. Yes,I can see how some of Lena's anger is on the fact she couldn't see what was right in front of her. A big moment here with Lena admitting to herself that she does love Kara in some manner. Lena being Kara's safe place is a good take. Donna arrived at the perfect time. To stop Lena from drinking herself into a stuper or using the VR again. So Donna knows what Lena is doing with her and is okay with it. I really love Donna's explanation for why she is okay with Lena clinging to her this way and how she is not okay with Lena hurting herself via the VR or drinking. I so love Donna getting angry when she finds out what Lena is doing with the VR while also revealing she knows Kara is Supergirl and lol how she knows. Great moment. I love how jealous Kara is of Donna in regards to Lena. Love Lena also defending Kara. Donna is right. Lena can't let Lex win. If Oliver is here,that must mean you are doing Crisis. Nice callback to this past seasons Thanksgiving episode with Spike. I like the idea of Supergirl developing a little friendship with Spike's owner,the little girl. It's sweet. Nice nod to the fact that Tom Cavanagh is playing Pariah. I also like that Lena misses her friendship with Alex and their love of science. Glad Lena is being brought into the Crisis threat. Love how protective Kara is of Lena here. So Earth 38 had a Oliver and Tommy and Lena knew them. There was no question Lena would help. Nice bringing Leo in. Hope he returns on shows for this too. Lena's past with Earth 38 Oliver and Tommy is pretty dark. Lex IS a bastard. Glad Ray is okay even if Earth X is gone. LOL at Kara's summery of previous multiverse adventures. Yay to Donna resuming the Wonder Girl mantle again and joining the fight. Great moment of J'onn introducing her as Wonder Girl and their warm reunion. Love the warriors handshake. Yay to the return of Winn.I think on the show,he'll be returning after Crisis I believe. But nice having him back earlier here. LMAO here at Leo asking if Earth 38 is the gay earth. I love that Kara is finally going to tell Lena how she feels but Oh No. The arrival of the shadow demons has me really worried. In the comics,this led to the death of Supergirl. I think Supergirl is pretty safe on the shows(I think one of the Supermen are going to die instead) but I'm really worried here. That it will take Supergirl dying or being seriously injured for Lena to realize how much she loves Kara. Amazing job on this chapter. |
Guest chapter 7 . 8/16/2019 Awesome chapter and can't wait for next chapter. Jennifer Baratta |