Love this! Wish it was longer though. Hope you do another (longer) one

The ending made me think of those old Mastercard commercials. Staying late after shift to chew the fat...pleasant. Seeing her sarcastic side come out...fun. Watching her skip out on a shift to go on a date? Priceless! If only it were a 2 shot with the rumor mill as a follow up with C/7 neither confirming nor denying...a girl can hope. Keep up the great work and happy writing!

This was fun :)

i review it. Thank u so much for this sweet lovely story. I am really glad u develop seven's attitude of Boxing, not just in the show as brutal action. its a little too simple for someone like sevens. Chakotay is a little boyish here, i am ok. Looking forward ur idea about Picardseven. They and Chakotay need some decent develop.

This was such fun! I liked the way you drew them together in such a natural way and didn't shy from conflict. Great story!

I forgot about this episode, this was great! Good job, I always love the Delaney sisters :)

Great addition to the episode and a much needed elaboration of the growing connection between Chakotay and Seven. Had they done this on screen the whole “Endgame” C/7 scenario would have been far better received by the fans.

u bring up a new story! awesome

An enjoyable read. Not an episode I remember much about, but your story makes me want to take another look.

I love your one-shots and this was no exception. It was an amazing addition to the original episode and so on point.

I absolutely adored Chakotay and Seven's interactions. I was as surprised as she was when Chakotay brought up the subject of one of her ancestors, but what a cool way to introduce the subject. It was so sweet when she was trying to read his facial expressions and referring to her social lessons in an effort to understand him. It was also very poignant as well that she still doesn't trust her own judgement yet.

I really enjoyed their banter as they talked about Sven 'Buttercup' Hansen, LOL ;) It made me smile. But of course there were deeper undertones underneath the humorous exchange. Seven was rightly hurt when Chakotay inferred she was only doing the research because the Captain commanded her to. I think that was a lesson learned by him not to underestimate Seven in this instance.

The ending was truly a joy. I LOVED the twins and how they not so subtly pushed Seven into doing something she would normally have denied herself-having fun. This 'reasearch' with Chakotay is sure going to be interesting, LOL ;)

I really enjoyed this story. Will there be another chapter so we can see this 'research.'?

Thanks so much for writing.

Hugs,

Nikki :)

oh my goodness this was so cute I would love it if this become another ongoing series or at least had a 2ed chapter which details Seven and Chakotay's 'research'. though some how I think that their research into fighting might turn into something more intermate.

I must admit I was surprised by Chakotays giddiness when aprchoing seven, he was like a kid in a sweet store. it was really cute

and oh dear lord the Delany twins are just fanatic, pushing their curtten boss out the door to have a steamy wressling match with their former boss (at least as far as one of them goes as wasn't one of them apart of the maquies?)

this was a fanstaic story but I wanted to ask, I recently wrougt a 7/c story though it wasn't overtly romantic called conflicted spirits and im currently in the final stages of completing another 7/c story which will be romanic in nature. and I was wondering how do I add them to this community (eg the commander and the Borg story community) or if its something you might consider doing.

also ive being reading a great 7/c story called 'adjustment period' by chrisinasesok , recently and I was surprised it wasn't already on this community page. anyway its a great work I think you should defently check it out and add it to this page.

anywho is there any chance we might also get an update for your story 'come away with me into the night" ? that's one of my favrate storys

I give this 9/10

Yours Alaster Boneman