| Reviews for Sparks |
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LittleRobinRedbreast chapter 15 . 9h I see what you did there with Trace and Rafa. Nice to see Clone Wars season 7 references. 0800 is sleeping in? I suppose it would be for someone who has prince-ly responsibilities. Poor Luke. Let the boy sleep. I love Luke reassuring Vader that he's not ashamed of him. And giving his father hugs when he can tell he's nervous. Best Son in the Galaxy. Vader doesn't deserve him, honestly. "At least I can rest assured that in all probability, Angel will not be at the ball tonight." SPELL YOU'RE KILLING ME. (In a good way. Dramatic irony is *chef's kiss*). Good to see some more Piett (and Veers). It's sweet he came to show Luke moral support, even though he obviously loathes fancy social events. Yay! More Luke and Mara interaction. (heart emoji) LEIA'S DRESS. YESSSS. THAT GIRL IS SO BADASS. I absolutely LOVE how Luke is only able to truly relax when Leia steps in to help cheer him up. Skytwins for the win! VADER CARRYING LUKE BECAUSE HE'S PRACTICALLY ASLEEP ON HIS FEET. THIS IS THE GOOD KUSH MY FRIEND. THANK YOU FOR THAT IMAGERY. Hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm. I'm currently reluctant to trust Palpatine (as if I ever trust him) about Senator Hyadum. Was she really plotting to kill Luke, or is His Royal Wrinkliness twisting reality to manipulate Vader? But what would his end goal be then if he is lying about it? I might just be overthinking this lol. XD Thank you for sharing! |
Anne LM chapter 15 . 8/8 I love this story with the sort of teenage-rebelliousness taken a step farther, and Luke in an impossible situation. It’s not finished though is it? There are so many loose ends still and I’d love to know how it will turn out. |
Sermione chapter 15 . 8/7 Poor senator Hyadum...only if she knew Luke was working for the Rebellion...guess Luke would be distressed to hear this. |
knitzkampf chapter 14 . 7/4 Great chapter. Han, and Vader's Pride and obstinate ignorance, the artwork and the Emperor's miscalculation... excellent work! |
Anonymousness chapter 14 . 6/29 And the game begins! I could really feel the noose begging to tighten around Luke's neck. I love the back and forth between Luke and the Emperor, and how Luke refuses to be manipulated. Palpatine makes me nauseous, and your interpretation of him makes my skin crawl with a mix of horror and revulsion. As an artist and a lover of art history, Palpatine showing off his "collection" of fine art filled me with unholy rage. I don't know of this was intentional, but it reminds me a lot of H*tler and how he had entire GALLERIES full of stolen paintings. Yikes. Vader's pov was a journey for me. While I by no means want him to figure out who Angel really is, I'm weirdly amazed at his ability to nope reality hard enough to see the truth that's right under his nose. It's oddly frustrating, lmao. |
Scrumblenut chapter 13 . 6/19 I love the way ‘Sparks’ is incorporated throughout the story. The whole theme is interesting to read as well. Looking forward to more. Take care. |
Cole Roz chapter 13 . 6/6 Very fun chapter! Really enjoyed Luke doing his thing. I wondered THE MOMENT the tooka brushed Luke's arm and left hair on it if Vader, or maybe someone else was going to find it... I don't know if I hope I'm right, or hope I'm wrong. Loved Luke and Leia's sibling moment, very sweet, I hope we get more of Leia taking care of her brother! X) And I can't wait to see how Luke handles getting thrown head-first into his new role! Also can't wait to see how Ahpra plays into this! Thanks for the update! |
knitzkampf chapter 13 . 6/5 Oh, so tense. |
Tarado chapter 13 . 6/5 Uh-oh. That tooka's fur is going to give Luke away... |
Galaxydragon101 chapter 13 . 6/5 Oh poor Luke, he’s a trooper. Who’s not gonna be very happy about Project Harvester... Leia is the best sister. I also happen to agree with Luke, Vader, grow a spine. Seriously. |
Sermione chapter 13 . 6/5 So...Vader either thinks Angel had visited he and Luke's apartment or suspects Luke is Angel, right? I guess the first is more likely. Can't wait for the next chapter |
knitzkampf chapter 12 . 5/26 You're doing such a good job building the moment when everything slams together. |
Cole Roz chapter 12 . 5/23 O0O Oh. So that was Palpatine's plan. Wow. I... am even more excited for future chapters now, this should be super interesting! I can't wait! XD |
Tarado chapter 12 . 5/23 Aww, poor Luke, he really is in a bind. Hope he doesn't get caught! Maybe he can escape to the Alliance? |
Sermione chapter 12 . 5/22 This was unexpected. I wonder how Luke will deal with being the imperial prince. Also want to see how Zev will react. Love the story as always! |