| Reviews for Achilles Heel |
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  Guest chapter 5 . 7/16 Great story, hope next update is soon |
| Guest chapter 5 . 4/27 This story is really good so far. The tiny, seemingly insignificant details stand out. |
 phineasn chapter 5 . 4/19 Thanks! Really like the story and it’s been a while since last update! With Covid it’s really great to have something of this quality to read! |
| jamesdewolf chapter 5 . 4/15 that was an excellent way of dealing with Seth and is liking how practical you are with the British military. |
| aflyingostrich chapter 5 . 4/15 This is excellent so far, please keep up the good work! |
| Starlord Master chapter 5 . 4/15 Keep writing. Good morning. |
| Starlord Master chapter 4 . 4/15 Vian sure is thorough. |
| Starlord Master chapter 3 . 4/6 More! |
| Starlord Master chapter 2 . 4/6 Sounds like fun on a bomb. |
| Starlord Master chapter 1 . 4/6 World War II was nasty. |
| Istariol chapter 3 . 3/17 I have only one thing to criticise... WHERE IS THE NEXT CHAPTER?! I really like this story so far. Hope to see more soon! |
| john777 chapter 3 . 2/20 interesting story, keep writing |
| jamesdewolf chapter 3 . 9/23/2019 loving so far can't wait for more keep it up you are doing well |
| Wargasm36 chapter 3 . 9/2/2019 I love your take on the British Stargate; I come from a site named .com that has many Stargate stories in its Creative Writing section; two stories that I highly recommend you search out are Stargate Initiative by Legacy, This Sceptred Moon by Patupi, and Stargate Project Arctic Circle by night33. I noticed a few spelling errors, and parts seemed rushed; but you have a great start to an epic tale and I look forward to more. If you decided to post it to Spacebattles I guarantee you will have more readers and commentators. Thank you. |
| Chloe chapter 3 . 8/28/2019 Good chapter. look forward to more |
