I think you're rushing this story, unintentionally. There's not enough detail support in this story. Don't be afraid to expand on what you're saying.

Tell us the colour of light flashing, let us know what colour Haraldur's spells are. Let us know how loud sounds are. If someone is happy, let us know that they're smiling, or if unhappy and frowning.

Love reading this. I love how Harry and Frodo bond over how Harry deal with things like Frodo did in past. Harry got reasons in every choice he makes but even living another life does not change he is great hero that stand up for others who need to. I think his past life make great story series if ever wish to share it one day. I do not not know when you write Harry potter and the two towers but sure look forward to reading it when you are ready to write it. I hope that Harry words help Frodo with his trials in dealing with that devil ring. That thing never stops till it get hold of mind of whoever wears it. I like to think that if Harry dealing with ring it would come see that could never take over harry because harry not one to fall for evil tricks. It shape to be amazing story that been honor to read and hope you be most kind to keep up great work in making new chapters in all stories that have touch so many people like me. I like to know who watching Lily when she was saying her good bye to James in your lost and found story. Be nice to know if wish to share. Think you for everything my friend.

Love your Story...

Not sure if a Patronus is more incospicuous than a Raven... a ball of light, even if it's travelling fast, will lure more attention than a raven, specially at night. Apart from that I agree that a Patronus is better.

a pretty nice end to book one, I had honestly expected you to keep them all together in one story. I had also expected Haraldur to join Frodo, at least going by some of the happenings in this chapter.

Yes! Awesome!

This story seems rushed to me comparing to your first one in this series would be impossible that one was amazingly done. Hopefully the sequels will tell the story vs playing overviews.
thanks

I look forward to the next part of the series, all I ask is that you post a chapter here when telling when your next story is written.

I like it

are you going to continue publishing in this fanfic or in another?

Great chapter thanks for writing it

good take on the story can't wait for the two towers

Thanks for continuing to share your awesome writing.

Thank you for updating. Good health to you.

I enjoyed Harry's journey through the Hobbit. So I was excited for the sequel. I'm loving it so far.

Waiting for more.