Reviews for The Last Straw Trilogy: Lemons
jennlyn78 chapter 5 . 7/17
That was amazing... Pls update again soon!
lisabann chapter 5 . 2/29
Of course Kyoya would have a Haruhi’s my submissive little toy fantasy. No surprise there, but I’m not sure if he’d truly want Haruhi to be that way, at least not now. It doesn’t matter though, because snowmen will be ruling hell before Kyoya and Haruhi will ever be together again. He’ll just have to settle for Rosie Palmer and her 5 lovely sisters!

A Chika/Haruhi fantasy might be cute. It would be a dream because I don’t think Chika would consciously fantasize about Haruhi. I’d imagine the dream would freak Chika out. He’d have trouble looking at Haruhi for several days afterwards. That could be pretty funny!
OHSHC Recs and Reviews chapter 5 . 2/26
It's really interesting to me that he has this very specific view of how he would like Haruhi to be as a wife and that it is totally far off from reality. This perfect little wife dressed up and absolutely submissive towards him. Such a twisted view. It just goes to show how wrapped up in himself he really can be in his perceptions of how he can manipulate others into doing things for him. Nicely done.
GinaSurreal chapter 5 . 2/25
wowzers that was hot. seeing Kyoya so dominating was interesting and really helped the scene along nicely. well done!
warrioresscat chapter 5 . 2/25
I loved it! 3
NarukoSon chapter 4 . 2/23
wow, these are great. cant wait to see what's next. maybe a honey senpai would be nice. I hope to see more, definitely a follow and fav
warrioresscat chapter 4 . 12/25/2019
I love what you're doing with these! I can see a Honey food play (or rabbit cosplay) scene being sexy, or a Tamaki BDSM scene going very nicely. Maybe even the twins doing a little sharing? You have so many potential directions you could go in. Thanks for writing this!
GinaSurreal chapter 4 . 12/11/2019
This was hot hot hot. I will always love a good Mori and Haruhi lemon. That little surprise at the end was delicious and well timed.
Angelmoon1089 chapter 4 . 11/23/2019
So good. Maybe Tamaki for the next one.
FromTheInsideOut2 chapter 4 . 11/22/2019
AHHHH! I was reading this and was like, "Oh man wonder where the inspiration for this came from?" And. Then. I. Saw. My. Name. AHHHHHHHH! I too am working on a Mori/Haru fic. It is really hard to write dialogue for someone who only speaks like 10 words max. Ya done good! May they have many babies together in this little corner of the world.
Mimiluvbug chapter 2 . 10/1/2019
wow! this is a pairing I don't get to read often! that's awesome! I love his chivalry is still there for how to treat (or not treat) a woman. this was a hot chapter. looking forward to more scenarios.
Mimiluvbug chapter 1 . 10/1/2019
this was great! I like the 'in the mind of' scenario. wonderfully written!
FromTheInsideOut2 chapter 2 . 9/19/2019
I love how her personality flexes and molds to each person she is with, interesting take on how the guys see her. I would be interested in a vanilla sickly sweet Mori lemon. Poor guy feels a bit helpless. Throw him a bone or in this case, a lemon.
sevendeadlyseas chapter 1 . 8/8/2019
No criticisms here, pretty good smut lol
It is interesting to see more from Kyoya's POV and you can definitely see his mentality in the 'mine' thing (creeeeepy). Also, I had a thought, did Kyoya ever or think about cheating on Haruhi? We know he's not a virgin and he seems like the kind of guy who thinks he's entitled to get sex from somewhere else if his girlfriend won't and see nothing wrong with it. I wouldn't put it past him.
Anyways, hope to see more, especially from Kasanoda and Mori, im guessing theirs vary drastically from Kyoya's.
Update soon xx
The-Ruby-Rabbit chapter 1 . 8/4/2019
Uh...uhmm... WOW.
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