This is like the greatest love story i've ever read? I love that it connects to all your other karmiro stories too! it's slow burn, which I love though at the same time I just want them to kiss and get together xD Thanks for giving us all feels. Yay, Karmi finally realized she's dumb in love with Hiro

Omgg what a tease! I wanted them to kiss so badly squealing so much rn

I'm so happy! This chapter is perfect! Flustered Hiro is my favorite! And yes Karmi, the boy is head over heels for you, now when will u realize that u feel the same way?! These two are killing me

Holy crap, I've been crying this whole chapter This hit me hard, and I felt for both of them! Not an easy feat emphasizing with both, when I read angst I usually pick a side. But both Karmi and Hiro made me feel for them! A really great, but sad, chapter. Looking forward to makeup

UMG CONTINUE!

A wonderful chapter and a good ending for this story I am really looking forward in seeing the next one. I am glad there are people who are always trying to make stories as close to the cannon as possible, I thank you a lot for this.

Haha man, this was simply amazing. Absolutely amazing. I love the conclusion you gave to this story. Sweet & in denial(sorta). I also loved Aunt Cass here. She was so straightforward & kind about what happened. I love the trust she places in them. I also adore the thought of these two cuddling close, with peaceful smiles. Amazing job as always! I can't wait to see with what you come up next!

It's a seldom thing for me to actually binge an entire story on a site of (let's face it:) mostly underachieved writers.

It's an even more seldom thing for me to review and kudos a story.

I'm about to do both of those things right now.

You could honestly give Karmi herself a run for her money writing fan fiction, and even with your acknowledgement of how many reviews this story has, to me I'm just outraged that this story doesn't have more. It's not the first time I've said it, and it won't be the last: the best this site has to offer gets so terribly overlooked.

I love myself a decent blend of fluff, angst, and humor, and you my good friend know how to brew one hell of a cocktail. I am a bit outraged that I never got my "big damn kiss," but I can only praise your realism. I like to take my romances slow and savory as well.

I sure wasn't expecting cameos in a story like this, but the moment you brought in Squirrel Girl, you had me giving this paranoid look over my shoulder like "Oh shit where's Deadpool, he CAN'T be far..."

I digress. You probably made me feel all the things you intended to...right down to the empty vacant hole in my chest when Karmi left his room. So much for closure.

To be honest with you, I never watched the show. Until just a few days ago, I wasn't even aware it existed. And even being the layman that I am - who really only read the character bios just to know who people like Karmi were - this story was a wonderful example of how someone can appreciate the characters and plot without having proper background context. I laud your knack for storytelling.

Sorry if the length of this review strains your eyes, but whenever I get that rare itch to tell another writer what I think, I rather have the propensity to unload. I'm a natural sucker for relationships between two characters that go from ripping at each others' throats to developing a mutual understanding that two young awkward geniuses can't aptly express. You should be proud of this creation. I know I am.

But for the love of God, you had BETTER get me that kiss SOMEwhere at SOME point. I, the self-appointed mouthpiece of your people, demand it.

I'm not even that invested in this ship. I merely came across it and was shown how well it worked. Tomorrow night it'll probably be Go Go's turn. :P But I can't say I won't be lurking around your page from time to time looking for the next installment.

TL;DR - Thanks for the amusing gander, also would 10/10 let Hiro romance scary Mutant Karmi (again?), hashtag monstergirls, hashtag gogreen, hashtag i'mnotweird, hashtag denial

'Til next time!

~EE

Me fascina todo!
eres increíble :'3
amo tus historias
no te preocupes amigo
tomate el tiempo necesario
perdón que mi comentario sea breve
pero no sé que mas escribir
solo que... es maravilloso poder leerte TwT'
gracias por escribir este magnifico fanfic! :'D
hasta la próxima historia! :)

I love everything!
you are amazing :'3
i love your stories
do not worry friend
take the necessary time
sorry my comment is brief
but I don't know what else to write
just ... it's wonderful to be able to read you TwT '
Thank you for writing this magnificent fanfic! :'D
Until the next story! :)

"'Peni' for your thoughts" AAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHH!
YES! Favorite character from "that 2018 movie."
Are you planning on having Peni and Hiro form a sibling bond? I could see it with the similarities. And that would be awesome reading them geeking out over robot tech together. I can't wait to read her story. PLEASE, release it soon! You will become my favorite person!

Thanks, and enjoy your day!

Best dream fake out I've ever read. Also YAY PENI! Can't wait to read it.

Thank you for this journey of making me squirm like an idiot in public places. This was GREAT!

Good job keep it up

Amazing!

Love your work in this one! :)

HOLY CRAP!
...I love it!
I wish I could write like you!