Ah, these green teenagers. I noticed you use "David" to asses D in this chapter, I guess it's because it's from Emma's point of view. I feel we're getting close to the end, and now I'm sad xD

Gosh, this chapter... I love it so much, Donnie has grown so much. I'm so proud of them all

This was a really nice ending to this part of the story. I never would have imagined that Donatello would have done so well. It’s good that he also went home willingly.

Uhhh I like where this is going! :D

Ah! Cannot wait for that reunion to happen! :D

"We're against the economy" I died.

The Donnie/David of this universe is prettu unlucky, isn't he? Too old to properly learn martial arts, didn't even got the high education he probably needed. And all the sickness stuff. Poor boy!

Great chapter. Donatello is really warming up to the possibilities that this new lease on life might offer. Thanks for sharing.

That is the saddest part of being a parent, to finally realize your children no longer need you for every little thing. Splinter is being as brave as his sons in his own way.

Wonderful job here!

Raph refusing to lose a battle with a PLUMBING FIXTURE is the greatest line of fanfiction I have read in... years. (To be fair, this is the ONLY fanfic I've read in years, but still.) Moments like this make me miss fandom.

At the Donatello part, in the end, I squealed. Too much! Feelings! To handle! Argh

They're all trying so hard :') I'm so glad... I want them to bond and I'm so happy it's finally happening

Aaaaaaaaa I'm. So relieved! I mean, I knew everything would turn out ok, but this feels... right. David coming to terms with what he is, but being unable to connect with his brothers like only a brother can do, it's the most logical outcome.

Mmyes, my favourite saturday moment, and a nice long chapter! Thank you, you talented woman.

AAAAHHHHH!

GOSH, I'm so EXCITED FOR NEXT WEEK! This fic is the BEST!