Reviews for Bruise
Lucrecia LeVrai chapter 1 . 5/23
It's one of my favorites among your Noragami fics. Straight to the point and touching.

You do have a way with words. Yes, the main theme of his fic is touching in its own right, but even a touching (or otherwise promising/interesting) theme can but butchered by poor writing skills. Like, I've read plenty of fics in which I would just shrug the characters' suffering off, because the angst either falls flat or is just overdone or is actually wangst not angst, and so on. It's not the case with your fics, though. Your writing style makes me care about these characters and their relations, and it sure helps their their actions generally make sense in context. Yato really does behave like a victim of lifelong domestic violence here, trying to first hide, then downplay his hurt, and even making excuses on behalf of the perpetrator.

There's lots of other delightful stuff here (if you can call hurt-comfort delightful, but I do): Yato taking his time to reassure Yukine, because of cause Yukine used to be a victim, too, even though he doesn't remember it. Yukine's open concern. Bishamonten's sympathetic yet not patronizing actions. The seriousness behind Yato's goofy humor. And so on. The characterization's spot-on, as usual, and the wording you've chosen to describe everything has this uncanny ability to pull directly at my heartstrings.

Many thanks for sharing this.
Fireflower34 chapter 1 . 3/26
AAAAAAAH HAVE I MENTIONED HOW MUCH I LOVE PROTECTIVE YUKINE?
BECAUSE I DO
SO MUCH
and honestly Yato's dad can go *bleep* himself. this smol bean doesnt deserve anything he did to him ;;
love this so much, and Bisha's support to! their dynamic is rly interesting!

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Kawaiibooker chapter 1 . 3/26
Okay so this tore my heart out and stomped on it for like 30 minutes, thank you so much for writing and sharing ️ (the part where Bisha came back hnnn;;; and Yukine being gentle after he knows what happened, I can't )

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MiuraWtr chapter 1 . 3/6
I love this
cuteeee
Nefres chapter 1 . 2/9
I thought I was okay. I was definitely okay, RIGHT up until the end where Yato faked a silly dream in order to get Yukine to sleep, when he couldn't sleep himself.

And now I'm very not okay. Good job.

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Minty220 chapter 1 . 12/3/2019
The whole thing with Yukine unconsciously freaking out because of his old father before death is amazing and I appreciate this fic to a large extent, thanks author.
Nathaniabp chapter 1 . 10/31/2019
*Steve Buscemi voice* How do you do, fellow traumatized manga readers?

Ok so I'm consuming fics like my life depends on it right now, thank you so much for this meal,

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Voolffman chapter 1 . 10/31/2019
Love it!

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DizzyBunnies chapter 1 . 10/20/2019
wjerhjkweh i didnt even realise who wrote this but about halfway through i was like "lemme guess," and was pleased with myself when i saw your username x)
wonderful work as always! 3

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LarkandLioness chapter 1 . 10/12/2019
Another great story! I especially loved Bishamon's appearance. I've missed reading about her.

And oh god, when is Yukine going to realize that weirdly, Yato was the one comforting *him* seemingly for no reason? Which, of course, triggers another "Yato Flash Back to Yukine's Tragic Death"

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writingregen chapter 1 . 10/12/2019
adore how you write these two and I'm still out here trying to recover from recent chapters

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Brittany chapter 1 . 9/11/2019
Awww, this was so well done. 3
Guest chapter 1 . 9/3/2019
Seriously one of my faves. I am unhealthily addicted to Yato angst, especially when someone is worried about him and he tries to play it off and his dumb f*cking father is being an abusive lil sh*t. So god bless you for the always amazing IN-CHARACTER yato angst because i appreciate the hell out of it. 3

Side note: I love Bishamon in your stories.
Also, I love that you understand the nuances within Nora’s character. They’re a lot more subtle than Yato and I definitely prefer him but I love how you portray her relationship with Yato and not as a clear cut villain or antagonist. Keep up the absolutely stunnin work my dude
BunniesOfDoom chapter 1 . 8/9/2019
This fic tore my heart to shreds in the best way, thank you. Thank you for writing it! Poor Yato. And Yukine reacting like that because of his past breaks my heart even more. Your writing is amazing as always!
red chapter 1 . 8/7/2019
noooooooooooo this is saaaaaaaaaaad i'm -
but the whole dynamics ahhhh you capture it so perfectly i'mmmmm
masterpiece
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