keel is a girl

At least her friend is still alive...

Well at least that bastard got what was coming to him. Though, it should be Sword of Wrath. The Curse Series weapons seem to be based on the Seven Deadly Sins. Rage is not one of the Sins, Wrath is.

Huh, good to see Raph help Naofumi with copying early on. And I can accept her sickness incapacitating her for Naofumi's "trial" (not that she really could have done much to influence it - heck, they probably would have accused her of "witchcraft" or something just to be rid of her too - though that in turn makes me wonder if we'll see a "chuch of the two heroes" in this universe or something?).

It will be interesting to see if Raph still finds Naofumi, if they party (given the legendary weapon thing), who will find Filo's egg from the slave trader, and if Raph can still get back to Rifana in time. Good luck on this story and other things!

I'm pretty hooked, and also impressed you captured Lolitalia's personality well. I really did feel like I was reading her story through her innocent view. The please continue.

I'm curious on how things will go when Raphtalia finds Naofumi by himself? Also I'm curious on what she going to do if she can't stay with Naofumi due to the effects of their legendary weapons.

Very creative and interesting! I really hope that Raphtalia can save Rifana! But... since the Heroes' weapons don't function well around each other, how can Raphtalia and Naofumi effectively travel together?

You got interesting AU stories going on, try not to burn yourself out though.

So far I don't see any problems btw

Interesting. I like this concept very much. Please. Continue.

I wonder how will Naofumi go to fight due to Raph being the Sword Hero? And I'm curious on who is going to be in Raph's party.