| Reviews for The Manipulation of Time and Matter |
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Ithildins chapter 1 . 4/22 I've never read this pairing/threesome before - I don't even think I've read Hermione with Voldemort or Tom Riddle Jr before - but this was a really amazing plot and your writing style swept the story along without bogging it down in gruesome acts or too much description - for sanity's sake, I imagine XD Severus/Hermione is a guilty pleasure of mine, of course - but the way you wrote Tom/LV and Hermione really got me interested in the pairing - they would be intellectually matched but on opposing moral compasses - one or the other would HAVE to give, if just a little. There were several small mistakes throughout, regarding word choice and grammar issues, but the plot was interesting enough to keep me hooked - which, as an English major, is a GREAT accomplishment. I tend to exit/DNF fics with too many errors, but I could not stop reading this one. |
Gracaire chapter 16 . 12/5/2019 Loved it! So clever. |
Lalalap chapter 1 . 11/13/2019 I really really wanted to like this. Your plot is super original and I guess that’s what kept me going through it. I really wish you would get a beta or give this another shot. -it’s so rushed. Seriously it could easily be a 100 chapter story with how much it needs to slow down -Snape is very out of character. Really they all are but him especially. The way the characters speak is so informal it’s just very immature how it comes across. -Everyone loves some good smut but this verges on cheap porno with how it’s described Props for the originality. |
J.J.88 chapter 16 . 11/3/2019 Wonderful! Both the plot and the trial. Best one this year! |
chibi-Clar chapter 16 . 11/3/2019 Omg! Love it! Sequel? It looks like tom-tam has similar personality traits to his other younger self (if that makes sense). Love it! |
Smithback chapter 16 . 11/2/2019 amazing |
VictoriaJameson chapter 16 . 11/2/2019 This is a great story! thank you for sharing! |
Concrete63 chapter 16 . 11/2/2019 Great story thank you for writing. |
Silver Orbed Lioness chapter 16 . 11/2/2019 I knew it! I knew it! I knew it! More Voldmione please x |
Guest chapter 15 . 11/2/2019 Oh no, at first I was thinking this was going to be a Delphini situation, but Hermione is giving birth to Voldemort himself, isn’t she? |
Silver Orbed Lioness chapter 15 . 10/31/2019 Ooo I know, I know, I know! |
Smithback chapter 15 . 10/30/2019 eso. perhaps .. Resurrection.. inside her? oh. hell! woooow |
bellybutton79 chapter 15 . 10/30/2019 OMG. OMG. OMG. HOLY SHIT. OMG. I No way. No way. You are a GENIUS! |
Guest chapter 15 . 10/30/2019 My theory is that Voldemort is going to be “reborn” as a baby. Awesome. |
Tater-K chapter 15 . 10/30/2019 I’m bouncing on the edge of my seat! I can’t wait for the next update! |