Dear Hawki:

Just thought I should mention: It should be "with bated breath the page is turned". Baiting is what you do to fishhooks.

Sincerely,
Qoheleth

This was so amazing and beautiful. :) Well done! It honestly reminds me of how I get lectured by my mom if I stay up late, whether with books or Instagram. I know how Hermione feels and by the way you write, I'd say you might too. :) It's a beautiful poem. And I think it sums up Hermione perfectly. Well done.

Regardless of creative liscence, this was fun. This fits Hermione to a :T".