Reviews for The Price
Stopdropanroll chapter 2 . 7/31
Wow this is great!
willam and jack and jake chapter 2 . 3/2
very well done can't wait to read more
willam and jack and jake chapter 1 . 3/2
interesting
OMAC001 chapter 2 . 11/1/2019
Finally! Can't wait!
Josh Spicer chapter 2 . 10/31/2019
Happy Halloween, whether it was intentional or not.

Oh shit, OM being JS' sister was not expect but a really nice touch.

As great as Jack is I did find it amusing seeing him get talked down to and feel like a little kid by a cat, even if it is Keith David Cat. Addendum: I do love that The Cat has some modicum of respect for Jack, even if it's just as a student.

Love seeing Santa and Jack being so open and seeing what happened post-movie. Always a fan of your writing but when you write something I'm genuinely interested in there's almost nothing I don't like.

Cool, they adopted they Trio.

Awesome! Welcome back! You're a come-and-go writer and that's okay because I get to reread previous chapters to get reacquainted.
Angelwings2002 chapter 2 . 10/31/2019
Whoa, a lot of stuff just happened! Happy Halloween to you too! I, excited for what happens next!
The Keeper of Worlds chapter 2 . 10/31/2019
Beyond excellent update and I really hope more comes out soon! Eager to see the meeting for sure!
org13fan chapter 1 . 9/29/2019
nice, lets see what Jack can do for poor Coraline
Angelwings2002 chapter 1 . 8/14/2019
I’m liking this story so far! It is really interesting and creative! Keep up the good work!
bhut chapter 1 . 8/4/2019
It's been a while since I've read a good Coraline story, and this is certainly good. Hope that you will keep it going in the future, too!
Seth A. Mincberg chapter 1 . 7/26/2019
Great work! As always your writing is riveting and so well detailed that one can jump in with no knowledge of the stories your fics are based on (I never watched Coraline). I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
Speaking of next chapters... When might we expect a new installment to "Stirred?" I really loved where you were going with W.I.T.C.H. in "Ripples." I really hope you plan to continue it?
DraconeKing chapter 1 . 7/26/2019
Looking forward to more, man! Really liked it!
Josh Spicer chapter 1 . 7/26/2019
You managed to work the Halloween Town world seemlessly into the Other World and OH MY GOD I can't help but mark out.

Sucks for the Other. Was always a fan of her, but at least it blends well into the future.

OHHHH! So because OM couldn't fulfill the duties Jack gave to her, it fell to Coraline? Or something similar, if her appearance is any indication. Not quite OM but kinda like Jack.
OMAC001 chapter 1 . 7/26/2019
So Coraline is turning into the Beldam and her only hope is Jack. Can't wait to see how this goes!
Bookworm5556 chapter 1 . 7/26/2019
I like it. It's well written (aside from a few minor mistakes, but I'm more focused on the word choice and how natural it feels), interesting, and for a fandom that sees far too few stories. I hope this continues.
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