Please have goku get Riolu and evolve into lucario, please. I think that pokemon would work with him. Also, I think its piccolo that's gonna be the next companion.

I can totally hear Masako X and lanipator playing goku and vegeta in this.

If only Goku and Vegeta could hit their growth spurt, then the wish would probably be seen as more of a positive than negative to them with how Sayians age XD

But seriously, this was a ice chapter. Yeah it definitely isn't as flashy as the Goku vs Vegeta fight, but not everyone has that kind of Ki control and normal battles still have their reason to be. Can't wait for them to see Nurse Joy's family. I sometimes believe her family is a bunch of clones XD (Same with Jenny)

The battle between Dawn and Barry was pretty good in my opinion. Liked the ending where Dawn basically used Turtwig's tackle dive against it in order to net the win. Barely saw any grammatical errors this time, other than the word hope being missing from a sentence, but that's really about it. Looking forward to the next chapter whenever it comes out man.

Now we just need GHOST NAPPA!
Wait. GHASTLY GHOST NAPPA!

A very awesome fight between Dawn and Barry and now Dawn is joining the team! Really though I was impressed by dawn wanting to travel with goku and Vegeta as it shows that she is willing to become stronger and be just as good as her parents. As for Barry, I can easily tell that he is gonna be Vegeta's Nappa, which be the way, loved the Team Four Star abridged joke lol. Dragon ball Z abridged will be missed but apart from that it's gonna be fun with their interactions. Same goes for maybe Barry and dawn actually learning ki at some point because I mean that has to happen. Lastly again the fight was fantastic and while it was not as explosive as the last one, the fight will still great in showing what both trainers need to improve on. Hopefully this loss will reach Berry to the point where he will grow as a character and overall the chapter was a lot of fun! I do have to wonder who's gonna be the dragon ball representative to join the cast in the story because if goku and Vegeta and the Pilef gang got send to Sinnoh, then who else is next? I will be questioning and thinking about that for the next couple of weeks so this better be a very good reveal for a character but regardless great job with the chapter and stay safe and healthy!

This was, as always, great. However, I must stress that a chapter every two months is an incredibly long wait time that should account for 20,000 words at least. For instance, I've written a 113,000-long story, and I always uploaded each chapter every 7 days with an average word count of 5,000 per chapter, and I still had time to do everything else I wanted and needed to every day. So please try to upload these chapters in less than two months from now on, as too little over too long can cause some people to eventually lose interest. I'm not going to lie, I had to force myself to start reading again after four months.

I love, love this story! Inspires me to get of my lazy backside and keep writing haha. Looking forward to more :D

Wow, King Gurumes, Bongo and Pasta are also in this universe! But how?

Good chapter, as always.

Came across the story due to a friend of mine recommending it to me I can safely say yeah this is a very solid pretty good 1st 6 chapters. Especially considering that the villains are going to be working to gather but it's obvious that Cyrus is going to be the more threatening between him and emperor Pilaf. As for goku and Vegeta as interactions with Dawn Barry and the professor there not that bad. I can definitely tell by goku being excited by Cynthia and her awesome strength that I can easily imagine their relationship is going to be something adorable. I'm still trying to get used to the fact that you're gonna hook him up with maylene Cynthia and I guess probably dawn but our than that what you have here is pretty good. Stay healthy and safe out there!

Now this is getting exciting!

Good chapter overall. I don't really have much to add this time other than I'm looking forward to the next chapter and the journey's beginning.

good chapter, keep going

I can already tell Vegeta is going to be a ball of fun in this. Hope you enjoy the manga. It’s my favorite version of Pokemon outside the games

Please give goku starly,turtwig,charmander,buizel,elekid and please give vegeta starly,squirtle,magby,aron,larvitar please