Those seems like it could be a great tale

Story is looking good so far, but sometimes you're missing or using the wrong words that would help make the sentences flow better.

I can't give examples right now since I'm on the mobile app, but it'll be much easier if I'm on my laptop.

How the fuck did Emiya get reincarnated into shirou even tho he hasn't even entered high school yet?

Another brilliant installment! Great job! Well done! I am dying to know what happens next! :D

Fangirls are scary ;)

Nice

Talk about blissful ignorance, on the part of Dumbledore.

Thanks for the chapter. Curious to see what mayhem comes from Shirou entering Hogwarts.

I wander who else was reincarnated

"Would you like to forget this conversation?", Shirou sounded like a fricken dystopian nurse or something.

good story so far. keep up the good work.

truth be told, it was lackluster when compared to the previous chapters, i understand you are trying to develop your world but it felt like whole chapter worth of exposition. there was no actual reason for them to induct hermionie into the ranks of mages yet. And spirti hacking even if a cool idea did not deserve a whole chapter to explain, nor was it wise for them to hint at being older. I would much rather have seen some development in the realtionship between shirou and rin, like rin introducing herself as his betrothed. The reaction of the wizard general population to harry potter being already engaged would be hilarious, so many crying fangirls, makes me chuckle. you can even hit their collective asses further again by saying he is marrying into the edelfelt family (I see UBW rin would want her children to keep the tohsaka name seeing as she has a magic crest for them to inherit and shirou does not hence i always thought he married into her family in UBW, so it wouldnt be a strech for them to do the same in this life if they marry again, plus Hadrian Edelfelt has a nice ring to it (she could always say shirou is a pet name for him once people start asking why she doesnt call him harry) what is your opinion regarding that idea? Once again, i love your work and its a fun story i really hope you keep it going, and maybe there is a good reason for the information you provided in here, but it could have been spread out a little more. either way thank you for a nice chapter. and i hope to hear back from you

Now, we only need Sakura and Saber and also Caren and Rider and... Dang, he's got a lot of girls in his harem.

good

Am confused... I see no new chapter too