Ok, I’m gonna go ahead and say it.
I, LOVE this fanfiction.
It has a nice story, dialogue, twists, emotional bonding, Ash being a fucking god at times, and the suspense. Heck, even the Suicune part was cool. I look forward to seeing new chapters of this amazing story, keep up the good work.

This is weird as fu*k. Imagine if you meet any wild animal and it says Daddy to you, if i were you, i am gonna kill myself over for cringy shi* like this. Did you even read your story and how rapey it is. Dont you feel shame creeping at the edge. The start is good, a bit tragedy for a spice and build the character. Then BAM, "Daddy". Instant turnoff.

You just say no Johto, I wonder tho whatever this will mean no Hoenn too? At first I think you would still do Hoenn but given how you want Sinnoh arc to just come would this mean Hoenn get cut too?

Hmm... Usually the grunt Didn't know that Giovanni is the boss right? I mean if it was common knowledge to lower rank, how come Lance or elite 4 didn't capture Giovanni?

What happen to Suicune btw? How she is that hurt?

Btw isn't Joy reaction too much? Seriously he is still 10. No matter how cool 10 years old is they most like look more adorable than handsome. And Joy would be a pedo if she interested in him.

I agree with you about Johto, I think Ash would win Indigo, so there's no need for Johto except maybe so when he meet Cynthia, he around 14. Maybe instead of full Johto and Orange island(the Lugia movies happen in it after all) story you can skip to give a flash back on something important and the rest just fast description what happen in Johto and Orange island.. something like "it's been two year since Ash won indigo league, there's many things that happened since he won indigo league. After winning he go to orange island to have holiday and because he want to test himself against drake(if I'm not wrong that the name of last gym leader). In there he meet lugia... bla bla bla. After that he go to Johto and won the league there. Remembering Johto always make Ash rember what happen in Altomare" flash back altomare incident.
You could do something like that or maybe choose different methods, this way you didn't need to write something you think redundant but at the same time it help preserve time line until you wreak it beyond recognition. Lol. Besides Johto is the area Ash meets celebi right? Of course this is fanfic and au, so you can do anything you want. Delia death already change quite a bit after all.

I hope he didn't get shiny all the time. That just be redundant imo.

Hmm... I wonder what the rule for using Mega evolution in indigo league? if Ash use it I hope his opponent can do that too, otherwise he just become a bully.
Metagros is very heavy right? I'm surprised that ash can lift him..

Hmm.. interesting. I think this is the first story I read that killed Delia.
I hope for harem with Cynthia, Serena and maybe Daisy Oak? That would been interesting. A trainer, a performance and researcher... if not Dasiy than I don't know... May? Or Dawn? Tho I think Cynthia, Serena and Daisy would be better combinations.. I hope you didn't add pokemon into the harem, not even legendary. It's just kinda strange imo... besides, what's better ship for gardevoir than gallade? I don't know why I always shipped both! Lol.

I am happy your back, am waiting excitedly for the next chapter. Also I have been very lazy and of course only remember to make the Pixel Art.
I is noob

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Thanks
MortemPlasmon

...I understand. Writer's Block is a bitch to deal with, and with a world as expansive as Pokemom, I guess I... can only hope for you to get back to this story. Anyway, best of luck. I'll check out your new story while I'm at it.

Hmm... Finally, someone understands. Misty is an insufferable bitch, and it became clear to me when I rewatched the anime a couple months back. Glad to see the author agreeing with me.

Hope that you do well.

It’s perfectly fine if you’ve fallen in a rut for a bit, and good on you for working your way out of it! It’s also okay to have standards you want to reach in your work, everything you’ve written so far certainly exceeds them! I love you for writing this and will wait happy and patient for whatever you’ve got next

Can’t wait for the next chapter this is one story even if it was based off a bet that’s really well done

looking forward to reading more. keep up the good work.

Cant wait for more, really looking forward to it :D

continue this fanfic, please...
it's very good and interesting, can't wait on the next chapter...