Take the fucking money...if I have to read one more fic where a financially distressed teen wont take money because of where it came from I'm going to toss a chair like theradbrad.

More please.

I like the idea.

This is an interesting story, I like it
I have seen some stories with similar premises, but this seems more interesting and is more unique then the others, as they usually just summon alternate version of Taylor. I can say that the writing does need some work, I'm not really bothered much by it, and I am in no way a critic.
I have made two alternate Taylors, one that has a voice in her head that helps her and she has a mix of powers, and the other who got kidnapped/adopted by Simurgh after both of Taylor's parents died at the age of 8 and now lives in a Simurgh made space home. She can transform into a pure light form and move at light speed, this Taylor is a new one I made, so I'll have to update it for more information about her to be revealed.
I'll let you use my two different versions of Taylor as I'm interested to see how this story turns out, I think it can turn out great.