what happens next?

Please continue

I hope you abandon this story, you turned an interesting story and convoluted it with all this 3 king stuff

Interesting.

I look forward to the next chapter.

Incredible that is the only word I can think of for this story please update soon

Holy crap. This is actually surprisingly good. I can't wait for more. I know Harry will be able to finally stop the Black and the White Kings from fighting.

Tiny error on the rings. The Potter ring is on the left ha g ring finger, but then you said the heir Black ring would go on the left ha d ring finger next to the Potter ring. Does that mean they are on the same finger, or was that a typo and it was meant to go on a different finger?

work is different but the plot of the botched ritual turns harry veela lord has been done

The first part of the story progressed way to fast I was lost and... I'm gonna leave now.

Good read and lemon. Sad to see Ginny get bashed but i would love to see more of this Good story maybe i should try a male veela harry fic

Excellent story so far.
Your tale of 3 brothers is much better than the JKR's for the Hallows. That said The father was a real dick. Cursing the one decent son just to punish the other 2. Not to mention the # of people who die every time their little tiff flairs up. Personally, I think he deserves to burn in Hell even more than The White and Black king.
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Awesome start.

Now THIS is a REALLY GOOD fairy tale!
More, peassse!

Thx for the update