| Reviews for Hidden In Plain Sight |
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rensull chapter 34 . 7/8 your stories are truly amazing! I love your work and style of writing and how you go indepth about family magics, thank you so much for sharing! |
paisleymll chapter 34 . 6/18 I very much enjoyed this story. it doesn't feel finished, so I'm hopeful you'll be inspired for more. I feel like there is more story with Russia, what is there wasn't necessary for the beautifully executed escape. thank you for sharing your time and talents! |
MahallieMacKenzie chapter 34 . 6/2 I binge read this today and LOVED it! Can't wait to read all your other works! |
Ingaomars chapter 9 . 5/24 Im only on chapter 9 and already in love. This story is both complex and truly original and it makes on think alot about so many things, That means you are a good storyteller. Like whats going on with Harry. Cant wait to read more |
angel897 chapter 34 . 5/20 thrilling to read, hope they get the rest of the people from the estates soon maybe with help form the other countries :) |
BratGirl1983 chapter 34 . 5/3 I am really looking forward to the next chapters, please update |
Guest chapter 34 . 4/6 I’m so glad you updated this story, I have really enjoyed it |
RowanRhys chapter 34 . 3/26 Absolutely outstanding story! I just finished binge-reading all 34 chapters and totally love this creative wonderful tale. The plot just caught me up and the characterizations had me totally invested. Thorfinn's and Hermione's relationship was beautifully developed and the emotion of their reunion just touched my heart. I also liked the subplot about Hermione discovering het true parentage. The intricacies of family magic that you developed really appeal to me. I love this excellent expansion of the Potterverse magic. There are so many possibilities that can grow from the concepts you use here. The way Ron and Harry treated Hermione made me so mad at them. I cheered when she threw Harry out of her house. You did really well with this aspect of the story. These characterizations of Harry and Ron tied into canon behaviors and I never felt that your handling of the split up of the Gold Trio was heavyhanded nor came out of nowhere as happens in other fics I've read. The ramping up of tension leading to the rescue of the Mandate victims from Azkaban had me glued to the screen, worried for our heroes and if something could go wrong. Now I'm very curious how you will wrap up the remaining threads. Since I don't see a completed tag, I am hopefully looking forward to any future continuation your your muse provides. Well done! |
Ladycrafter chapter 34 . 2/8 enjoying this story. |
Guest chapter 34 . 1/16 I’m so glad you updated, I really enjoy reading your story |
xXMizz Alec VolturiXx chapter 34 . 1/16 great chapter! they are finally reunited |
Always Brooke chapter 34 . 1/15 beautiful chapter |
TinkerBellNeverland chapter 1 . 1/15 First chapter and I’m hooked:) |
TinkerBellNeverland chapter 1 . 1/15 I read the summary and thought to myself, “that ugly toad is doing what?! Got to read it.” Lol |
mybrat2006 chapter 33 . 1/12 I am absolutely loving this amazing piece of work! I can't wait to read the rest. |