I like it, please update soon...

Scribbles!

Quite a cliffhanger! Eeeek! I feel so sorry for Kelion. He is carrying so much grief. So much is happening and there is so much misunderstanding. This story really holds me bound! I eagerly await your next chapter!

Thanks!

Stay safe!

MM

amazing chapter well done. I imagine you must be living somewhere on the other side of the world, considering you're updates come through at mid night. Every Saturday night I stay up till one in the morning reading your new chapters, and non of them disappoint. Thank you so much for writing, you're truly talented.

I finally decided to read this, and I’m really loving it. Keep up the nice writing!

Oh no, that is not good. Not good at all. Please update soon.

Welcome back! (I just needed a new type of greeting. No one cares if it doesn't really fit there... Right?)
At least for me this is the best chapter what this story has until now. I was reading it for 10 minutes and I had time for crying about 3 or 4 times, laughing at least 7 times, also ruining my hair at the end and more than 3 other emotions and acts what I cannot name.
Really good work you know!
I am just in love with that "older brother Kelion" who really loves Legolas and also tries to protect him from everything AND also tries to keep him happy and now?! I am feeling SO sorry about him! He actually lost his little brother who he REALLY, REALLY loved, then his adar was gone and sick and he had to rule a kingdom all on his own and do several other hard things too?! *crying*
I was a bit confused with end like: what orcs?! Why are they coming?! Didn't really get that, but I am sure that I can fix this with just reading next chapter. (of course, only if this Saturday decides to still be there this time...)
And second place that I absolutely didn’t love but that I rather ignored was that how fast they ALL decided that noldor IS going to attack them even if they had just some arrows and footprints to prove it. But I also understand them at some way, becouse Legolas was dead, they all mourned and they actually had pretty bad past with noldor.(do not say terrible, then pretty bad)
However next to the rest of the chapter and the rest of the story it doesn't really matter much and after today I love your story twice as much as before.
Also the fact that they finally found these arrows and footprints and Kelion actually hoped for a moment that Legolas is still alive made me REALLY want to become a time traveler to alredy read next chapter.
And what about that comfort Meldir (hope didn't write this at too wrong way) gave to Kelion then...
You REALLY are my favourite girl!
So and... *reads what you answered to my last review*
OMG! Thank you SO much!
*makes a fussy face* I am really happy to hear that! (sorry, I tought: read that)
This is a REALLY good chapter and you really made me feel like I want to live only on Saturdays. AGEN!?
Also: if anyone who has time machine happens to read this review then PLEASE can you loan this to me for 15 minutes?
Continue to make our lives better!
;D

Suilad dear mellon nin. Many thanks for your kind reply. I do enjoy your german words very much and think, it is very nice of you to use a bit of my native language. The last chapters were rather dramatic and exciting. I hope, that the Greenwood elves will be strong enough to fight the yrch and
that king Thranduil and prince Kelion will overcome their grief and learn, that Legolas is alive and well.
Have a nice week and stay healthy.
Namarie

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Love the Elves can communicate with trees.

O.O ohh boyyy. More coming on with the barrier! I rlly liked that little Friendship Moment between Kelion and Meldir. But there are certainly some interesting events up ahead! I love your OCs and have incorporated them well into this story :3. Blessings mellon nin!

nicely done..

Yes! They're getting closer to uncovering what really happened! Oh wait. They'll think that the Noldo were behind this! That they made faked Legolas's death to spite them. And then captured Legolas to torture him. This is not good.

Thranduil, it's just TWO days after drinking the poison, elf or not you should stay in bed. Do they even know, other than the fact that it won't kill him, what the poison does?

Poor Thranduil! You described so well how weak his body is while his mind struggles to stay alive. I hope he is not fading and that he is able to stop itching in bed and get up and move. Poison is a wicked thing . . .

Hrgefrufyfhcvffhhhf. It’s hAppening! I rlly don’t wanna say anything in case of spoilers but this is honestly scary I hope he holds out XoX.
Another amazing chapter mellon nin! The suspense still grows with every event! I like how your characterization stays consistent as it can be rather difficult to maintain. I can at least fathom how much work you put into this and greatly admire you for it. Your enthusiasm and the way you plow through the hard days is inspiring and I just have to tell you that it has certainly paid off. You have weaved a beautiful story mellon nin.
I’ll be looking forward to hearing from you again.

Good afteroon! (at least for me, I have no idea what time is in America or somewhere else)
So... I am in complete shock right now. The last scene frightened me at RALLY scary way! Until now it is mabye the most scary thing in last chapters.
It seems like everything is okay and then... BOOOM! Crazy, but cool too.
If I opened that story then before I started reading I just watched that number of chapters and I was just like: omg 49?! Really?! And then I read it: 50?!
You are really good at manipulation! Last weekend I absolutely hated you and now I love you... What?!
So my favourite scene: they found Legolas' arrow!
OMG! AM I GOING CRAZY RIGHT NOW!? OF COURSE I AM! THIS IS SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
COOL! I'VE BEEN WAITING FOR THIS ONE!
FINALLY!
Now I think that Legolas can get back home in next 3 ch's or... He would stay out of Mirkwood for next 20-30 ch's.
Thiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiis big cuestion!
I am really happy about that you like my reviews becouse I've spent on that review alredy 24 minutes. (I still need to use a lot trantslate and I prefer working with text what tooks also a lot time)
Still I love your story and right now I am really more excited than you can even imagine.
Also huuuge thanks for going to post new chapter alredy on Monday!
I am really sorry about Thrandúil and Kelion too.
In love with it!

I absolutely love Thranduil!